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| Re: More Adventures in 'Who Writes This Stuff!?' | |
| Posted By: BanditORR <banditorr@hotmail.com> | Date: 9/28/10 10:27 a.m. |
In Response To: Re: More Adventures in 'Who Writes This Stuff!?' (General Battuta) : As I mentioned in the reply below, this is the kind of critique we do at : writing workshops - we look for lines that jump out and whack the : player/reader with something that breaks immersion. : When my own mod team was finishing work on our first release, we did a big
: Attention to detail pays. I wouldn't have enjoyed Black Hawk Down if somebody
That's kind of my point. This shouldn't be a line that breaks immersion at all. It is NOT a bad line. It's not a good line, but it isn't bad.
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