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Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva

Posted By: scratskinner Date: 10/27/17 1:34 a.m.
In Response To: Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva (Forrest of B.org)

: This week I made some extensive structural/navigational changes (adding
: "season x episode" numbers to every page, and a link at the
: bottom of the prose to the next page in narrative order), and I also added
: some small notes mostly inspired by discussion with scratskinner here, and
: I also reorganized Life in Another World again, condensing what was there
: before back to only one Part,
And apparently moving much of it back one series. (I was fairly worried you had nixed certain bits entirely.)
And on that note, you've got a couple artifacts in the start of the Birth of Another World: the new framing of recovering Murdock's memories is a bit at odds with the recounting of stuff only other people would know. As this operation is taking place at the permission of the Queen of Hell, and as she is quite explicitly present in Xio's head at this point, perhaps you could have that stuff rephrased as the Queen of Hell would see and hear it, interjecting with her own thoughts on the beginning of Virtuality.
(And maybe some confusion on the part of those recovering their memories, as they wonder why their therapist keeping talking in different voices... Did Murdock and his sister ever actually hear the Queen of Hell talking, or did they only ever see the trail of death and destruction she left behind her?)
Also, where exactly did you add the small notes?
: and adding two skeleton Parts with some more
: interesting philosophical stuff about AIs and robots to write more about
: later.
So, are we going to see any ex-Virtuals running around working for the Redstone Empire? or Pacifica?

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The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 8/24/17 10:00 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva General-RADIX 8/25/17 4:53 a.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva General-RADIX 8/25/17 10:26 a.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 8/25/17 11:06 a.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva General-RADIX 8/25/17 11:31 a.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 8/25/17 11:37 a.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva scratskinner 8/25/17 8:45 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 8/25/17 9:47 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva scratskinner 8/25/17 10:53 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 8/25/17 11:36 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva — MMOSs Can-ned Food 8/26/17 7:40 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva General-RADIX 8/26/17 5:10 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 8/27/17 8:01 a.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva scratskinner 8/27/17 1:13 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 8/27/17 6:22 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Can-ned Food 8/26/17 6:36 p.m.

Nurbal Colony: Part 1 Forrest of B.org 9/6/17 9:45 p.m.

Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 1 Forrest of B.org 9/7/17 8:28 p.m.

Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 1 scratskinner 9/7/17 9:24 p.m.

Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 1 Forrest of B.org 9/7/17 9:50 p.m.

Re: Nurbal Colony Can-ned Food 9/8/17 1:42 p.m.

Re: Nurbal Colony irons 9/15/17 2:53 p.m.

Re: Nurbal Colony Forrest of B.org 9/18/17 1:26 p.m.

Re: Nurbal Colony irons 9/19/17 2:11 p.m.

Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3 Forrest of B.org 9/8/17 8:59 p.m.

Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3 General-RADIX 9/8/17 9:59 p.m.

Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3 Forrest of B.org 9/8/17 10:44 p.m.

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Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3 Forrest of B.org 9/9/17 8:13 a.m.

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Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3 Forrest of B.org 9/19/17 3:11 p.m.

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Re: Nurbal Legacy: Part 2 Forrest of B.org 9/13/17 10:06 p.m.

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Re: Nurbal Legacy: Part 3 Forrest of B.org 9/19/17 2:35 p.m.

Re: Nurbal Enemy: Part 2 Forrest of B.org 9/19/17 10:28 p.m.

Re: Nurbal Enemy: Part 2 Forrest of B.org 9/20/17 7:48 p.m.

Columbia Resurgent: Part 1 Forrest of B.org 10/3/17 9:15 p.m.

Re: Columbia Resurgent: Part 2 Forrest of B.org 10/4/17 9:29 p.m.

Re: Columbia Resurgent: Part 3 Forrest of B.org 10/5/17 9:32 p.m.

Re: Columbia Resurgent: Part 3 Forrest of B.org 10/10/17 9:57 p.m.

Terra Resurgent: Part 2 Forrest of B.org 10/11/17 9:36 p.m.

Re: Terra Resurgent: Part 2 scratskinner 10/12/17 12:22 p.m.

Re: Terra Resurgent: Part 2 Forrest of B.org 10/12/17 12:24 p.m.

Terra Resurgent: Part 3 Forrest of B.org 10/12/17 9:31 p.m.

Sol Resurgent: Part 1 Forrest of B.org 10/17/17 10:37 p.m.

Sol Resurgent: Part 2 Forrest of B.org 10/18/17 10:09 p.m.

Sol Resurgent: Part 3 Forrest of B.org 10/19/17 9:49 p.m.

Re: Sol Resurgent: Part 3 scratskinner 10/19/17 10:45 p.m.

Re: Sol Resurgent: Part 3 Forrest of B.org 10/19/17 11:24 p.m.

Virtuality Transcendent: Part 1 Forrest of B.org 10/30/17 10:10 p.m.

Virtuality Transcendent: Part 2 Forrest of B.org 10/31/17 9:31 p.m.

Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 Forrest of B.org 11/1/17 9:52 p.m.

Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 scratskinner 11/7/17 9:05 p.m.

Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 Forrest of B.org 11/7/17 9:20 p.m.

Virtuality Incarnate: Part 1 Forrest of B.org 11/7/17 9:08 p.m.

Virtuality Incarnate: Part 2 Forrest of B.org 11/8/17 8:25 p.m.

Virtuality Incarnate: Part 3 Forrest of B.org 11/9/17 8:55 p.m.

Virtuality Immanent: Part 1 Forrest of B.org 11/14/17 8:55 p.m.

Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 Forrest of B.org 11/15/17 9:03 p.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 scratskinner 11/16/17 1:46 a.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 Forrest of B.org 11/16/17 1:20 p.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 scratskinner 11/17/17 2:40 a.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 Forrest of B.org 11/17/17 4:00 p.m.

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Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 Forrest of B.org 11/17/17 10:08 p.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 VikingBoyBilly 11/18/17 2:35 a.m.

Re: Eternal stuff Forrest of B.org 11/20/17 10:02 a.m.

Re: Eternal stuff VikingBoyBilly 11/20/17 2:27 p.m.

Re: Eternal stuff General-RADIX 11/20/17 6:32 p.m.

Re: Eternal stuff Forrest of B.org 11/20/17 8:21 p.m.

Re: Eternal stuff General-RADIX 11/20/17 9:19 p.m.

Re: Eternal stuff VikingBoyBilly 11/22/17 1:46 p.m.

Re: Eternal stuff General-RADIX 11/22/17 3:30 p.m.

Re: Eternal stuff nevets01 11/25/17 4:37 a.m.

Re: Eternal stuff PerseusSpartacus 11/25/17 10:14 a.m.

Re: Eternal stuff Forrest of B.org 11/26/17 9:25 p.m.

Re: Eternal stuff General-RADIX 11/26/17 10:21 p.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 scratskinner 11/18/17 3:39 a.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 Forrest of B.org 11/20/17 10:33 a.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 3c scratskinner 11/22/17 7:20 a.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 3c Forrest of B.org 11/22/17 9:54 a.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 General-RADIX 11/18/17 6:37 p.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 Forrest of B.org 11/20/17 10:40 a.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 General-RADIX 11/20/17 1:51 p.m.

Virtuality Immanent: Part 3 Forrest of B.org 11/16/17 9:57 p.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3 scratskinner 11/17/17 12:38 a.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3 General-RADIX 11/17/17 7:15 a.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3 VikingBoyBilly 11/17/17 12:35 p.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3 Forrest of B.org 11/17/17 3:23 p.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3 VikingBoyBilly 11/17/17 6:06 p.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3 Forrest of B.org 11/17/17 10:05 p.m.

Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3 nevets01 11/17/17 12:46 p.m.

The Chronicles of Quelouva are DONE! (ish) Forrest of B.org 12/29/17 8:31 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva are DONE! (ish) General-RADIX 12/30/17 1:47 a.m.

some random thoughts scratskinner 9/9/17 12:29 a.m.

Re: some random thoughts Forrest of B.org 9/9/17 8:40 a.m.

Re: some random thoughts scratskinner 9/10/17 2:19 a.m.

Re: some random thoughts Forrest of B.org 9/11/17 9:35 a.m.

Re: some random thoughts scratskinner 9/12/17 5:14 p.m.

Re: some random thoughts Forrest of B.org 9/12/17 6:24 p.m.

Re: some random thoughts scratskinner 9/14/17 7:53 p.m.

Re: some random thoughts Forrest of B.org 9/14/17 10:13 p.m.

Re: some random thoughts scratskinner 9/16/17 11:01 a.m.

Re: some random thoughts Forrest of B.org 9/16/17 2:56 p.m.

Re: some random thoughts scratskinner 9/17/17 12:13 p.m.

Re: some random thoughts Forrest of B.org 9/18/17 8:10 a.m.

Re: some random thoughts 2b scratskinner 9/16/17 9:12 a.m.

Re: some random thoughts 2b Forrest of B.org 9/16/17 2:58 p.m.

Re: some random thoughts 2b scratskinner 9/17/17 12:31 p.m.

Re: some random thoughts 2b Forrest of B.org 9/18/17 7:41 a.m.

Re: some random thoughts Forrest of B.org 9/11/17 3:37 p.m.

Re: some random thoughts Forrest of B.org 9/14/17 1:55 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva General-RADIX 9/11/17 8:02 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 9/28/17 9:43 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva scratskinner 9/30/17 1:11 a.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 10/2/17 9:56 a.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva scratskinner 10/7/17 12:53 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 10/9/17 3:14 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva scratskinner 10/17/17 6:38 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 10/17/17 8:23 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Tycho 10/22/17 4:14 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva nevets01 10/23/17 7:42 a.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 10/23/17 10:41 a.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 10/26/17 10:49 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva scratskinner 10/27/17 1:34 a.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 10/27/17 8:32 a.m.

Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 *MOVED* scratskinner 11/9/17 10:50 p.m.

Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 *MOVED* Forrest of B.org 11/10/17 8:39 a.m.

Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 *MOVED* scratskinner 12/21/17 12:48 p.m.

noticed you've updated while doing some factchecks scratskinner 12/21/17 2:26 p.m.

Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 *MOVED* Forrest of B.org 12/21/17 3:48 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 11/22/17 12:18 p.m.

Future Perfect expanded Forrest of B.org 11/29/17 10:00 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 12/7/17 9:30 a.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva General-RADIX 12/7/17 9:43 a.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 12/7/17 10:24 a.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva scratskinner 12/8/17 7:22 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 12/9/17 8:19 a.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 12/13/17 9:10 a.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva General-RADIX 12/13/17 3:18 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Yossarian 12/15/17 9:58 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva scratskinner 12/16/17 1:22 p.m.

Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva Forrest of B.org 12/18/17 12:56 p.m.

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: And apparently moving much of it back one series. (I was fairly worried you : had nixed certain bits entirely.) : And on that note, you've got a couple artifacts in the start of the Birth of : Another World: the new framing of recovering Murdock's memories is a bit : at odds with the recounting of stuff only other people would know. As this : operation is taking place at the permission of the Queen of Hell, and as : she is quite explicitly present in Xio's head at this point, perhaps you : could have that stuff rephrased as the Queen of Hell would see and hear : it, interjecting with her own thoughts on the beginning of Virtuality. : (And maybe some confusion on the part of those recovering their memories, as : they wonder why their therapist keeping talking in different voices... Did : Murdock and his sister ever actually hear the Queen of Hell talking, or : did they only ever see the trail of death and destruction she left behind : her?) : Also, where exactly did you add the small notes? : So, are we going to see any ex-Virtuals running around working for the : Redstone Empire? or Pacifica?

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The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	8/24/17 10:00 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	General-RADIX	8/25/17 4:53 a.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	General-RADIX	8/25/17 10:26 a.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	8/25/17 11:06 a.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	General-RADIX	8/25/17 11:31 a.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	8/25/17 11:37 a.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	8/25/17 8:45 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	8/25/17 9:47 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	8/25/17 10:53 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	8/25/17 11:36 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva — MMOSs	Can-ned Food	8/26/17 7:40 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	General-RADIX	8/26/17 5:10 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	8/27/17 8:01 a.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	8/27/17 1:13 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	8/27/17 6:22 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Can-ned Food	8/26/17 6:36 p.m.
Nurbal Colony: Part 1	Forrest of B.org	9/6/17 9:45 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 1	Forrest of B.org	9/7/17 8:28 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 1	scratskinner	9/7/17 9:24 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 1	Forrest of B.org	9/7/17 9:50 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Colony	Can-ned Food	9/8/17 1:42 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Colony	irons	9/15/17 2:53 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Colony	Forrest of B.org	9/18/17 1:26 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Colony	irons	9/19/17 2:11 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	9/8/17 8:59 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3	General-RADIX	9/8/17 9:59 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	9/8/17 10:44 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3	VikingBoyBilly	9/9/17 7:52 a.m.
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	9/9/17 8:13 a.m.
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3	VikingBoyBilly	9/9/17 3:18 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	9/9/17 3:56 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	9/11/17 4:00 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3	VikingBoyBilly	9/15/17 3:29 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	9/19/17 3:11 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Legacy: Part 1	Forrest of B.org	9/12/17 10:12 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Legacy: Part 1	General-RADIX	9/12/17 11:17 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Legacy: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	9/13/17 10:06 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Legacy: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	9/14/17 9:51 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Legacy: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	9/19/17 2:35 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Enemy: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	9/19/17 10:28 p.m.
Re: Nurbal Enemy: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	9/20/17 7:48 p.m.
Columbia Resurgent: Part 1	Forrest of B.org	10/3/17 9:15 p.m.
Re: Columbia Resurgent: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	10/4/17 9:29 p.m.
Re: Columbia Resurgent: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	10/5/17 9:32 p.m.
Re: Columbia Resurgent: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	10/10/17 9:57 p.m.
Terra Resurgent: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	10/11/17 9:36 p.m.
Re: Terra Resurgent: Part 2	scratskinner	10/12/17 12:22 p.m.
Re: Terra Resurgent: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	10/12/17 12:24 p.m.
Terra Resurgent: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	10/12/17 9:31 p.m.
Sol Resurgent: Part 1	Forrest of B.org	10/17/17 10:37 p.m.
Sol Resurgent: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	10/18/17 10:09 p.m.
Sol Resurgent: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	10/19/17 9:49 p.m.
Re: Sol Resurgent: Part 3	scratskinner	10/19/17 10:45 p.m.
Re: Sol Resurgent: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	10/19/17 11:24 p.m.
Virtuality Transcendent: Part 1	Forrest of B.org	10/30/17 10:10 p.m.
Virtuality Transcendent: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	10/31/17 9:31 p.m.
Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	11/1/17 9:52 p.m.
Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3	scratskinner	11/7/17 9:05 p.m.
Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	11/7/17 9:20 p.m.
Virtuality Incarnate: Part 1	Forrest of B.org	11/7/17 9:08 p.m.
Virtuality Incarnate: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	11/8/17 8:25 p.m.
Virtuality Incarnate: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	11/9/17 8:55 p.m.
Virtuality Immanent: Part 1	Forrest of B.org	11/14/17 8:55 p.m.
Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	11/15/17 9:03 p.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	scratskinner	11/16/17 1:46 a.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	11/16/17 1:20 p.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	scratskinner	11/17/17 2:40 a.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	11/17/17 4:00 p.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	VikingBoyBilly	11/17/17 5:57 p.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	11/17/17 10:08 p.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	VikingBoyBilly	11/18/17 2:35 a.m.
Re: Eternal stuff	Forrest of B.org	11/20/17 10:02 a.m.
Re: Eternal stuff	VikingBoyBilly	11/20/17 2:27 p.m.
Re: Eternal stuff	General-RADIX	11/20/17 6:32 p.m.
Re: Eternal stuff	Forrest of B.org	11/20/17 8:21 p.m.
Re: Eternal stuff	General-RADIX	11/20/17 9:19 p.m.
Re: Eternal stuff	VikingBoyBilly	11/22/17 1:46 p.m.
Re: Eternal stuff	General-RADIX	11/22/17 3:30 p.m.
Re: Eternal stuff	nevets01	11/25/17 4:37 a.m.
Re: Eternal stuff	PerseusSpartacus	11/25/17 10:14 a.m.
Re: Eternal stuff	Forrest of B.org	11/26/17 9:25 p.m.
Re: Eternal stuff	General-RADIX	11/26/17 10:21 p.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	scratskinner	11/18/17 3:39 a.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	11/20/17 10:33 a.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 3c	scratskinner	11/22/17 7:20 a.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 3c	Forrest of B.org	11/22/17 9:54 a.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	General-RADIX	11/18/17 6:37 p.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	11/20/17 10:40 a.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	General-RADIX	11/20/17 1:51 p.m.
Virtuality Immanent: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	11/16/17 9:57 p.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3	scratskinner	11/17/17 12:38 a.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3	General-RADIX	11/17/17 7:15 a.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3	VikingBoyBilly	11/17/17 12:35 p.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	11/17/17 3:23 p.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3	VikingBoyBilly	11/17/17 6:06 p.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	11/17/17 10:05 p.m.
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3	nevets01	11/17/17 12:46 p.m.
The Chronicles of Quelouva are DONE! (ish)	Forrest of B.org	12/29/17 8:31 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva are DONE! (ish)	General-RADIX	12/30/17 1:47 a.m.
some random thoughts	scratskinner	9/9/17 12:29 a.m.
Re: some random thoughts	Forrest of B.org	9/9/17 8:40 a.m.
Re: some random thoughts	scratskinner	9/10/17 2:19 a.m.
Re: some random thoughts	Forrest of B.org	9/11/17 9:35 a.m.
Re: some random thoughts	scratskinner	9/12/17 5:14 p.m.
Re: some random thoughts	Forrest of B.org	9/12/17 6:24 p.m.
Re: some random thoughts	scratskinner	9/14/17 7:53 p.m.
Re: some random thoughts	Forrest of B.org	9/14/17 10:13 p.m.
Re: some random thoughts	scratskinner	9/16/17 11:01 a.m.
Re: some random thoughts	Forrest of B.org	9/16/17 2:56 p.m.
Re: some random thoughts	scratskinner	9/17/17 12:13 p.m.
Re: some random thoughts	Forrest of B.org	9/18/17 8:10 a.m.
Re: some random thoughts 2b	scratskinner	9/16/17 9:12 a.m.
Re: some random thoughts 2b	Forrest of B.org	9/16/17 2:58 p.m.
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Re: some random thoughts 2b	Forrest of B.org	9/18/17 7:41 a.m.
Re: some random thoughts	Forrest of B.org	9/11/17 3:37 p.m.
Re: some random thoughts	Forrest of B.org	9/14/17 1:55 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	General-RADIX	9/11/17 8:02 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	9/28/17 9:43 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	9/30/17 1:11 a.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	10/2/17 9:56 a.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	10/7/17 12:53 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	10/9/17 3:14 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	10/17/17 6:38 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	10/17/17 8:23 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Tycho	10/22/17 4:14 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	nevets01	10/23/17 7:42 a.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	10/23/17 10:41 a.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	10/26/17 10:49 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	10/27/17 1:34 a.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	10/27/17 8:32 a.m.
Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 MOVED	scratskinner	11/9/17 10:50 p.m.
Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 MOVED	Forrest of B.org	11/10/17 8:39 a.m.
Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 MOVED	scratskinner	12/21/17 12:48 p.m.
noticed you've updated while doing some factchecks	scratskinner	12/21/17 2:26 p.m.
Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 MOVED	Forrest of B.org	12/21/17 3:48 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	11/22/17 12:18 p.m.
Future Perfect expanded	Forrest of B.org	11/29/17 10:00 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	12/7/17 9:30 a.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	General-RADIX	12/7/17 9:43 a.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	12/7/17 10:24 a.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	12/8/17 7:22 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	12/9/17 8:19 a.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	12/13/17 9:10 a.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	General-RADIX	12/13/17 3:18 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Yossarian	12/15/17 9:58 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	12/16/17 1:22 p.m.
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	12/18/17 12:56 p.m.



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	Message: : And apparently moving much of it back one series. (I was fairly worried you : had nixed certain bits entirely.) : And on that note, you've got a couple artifacts in the start of the Birth of : Another World: the new framing of recovering Murdock's memories is a bit : at odds with the recounting of stuff only other people would know. As this : operation is taking place at the permission of the Queen of Hell, and as : she is quite explicitly present in Xio's head at this point, perhaps you : could have that stuff rephrased as the Queen of Hell would see and hear : it, interjecting with her own thoughts on the beginning of Virtuality. : (And maybe some confusion on the part of those recovering their memories, as : they wonder why their therapist keeping talking in different voices... Did : Murdock and his sister ever actually hear the Queen of Hell talking, or : did they only ever see the trail of death and destruction she left behind : her?) : Also, where exactly did you add the small notes? : So, are we going to see any ex-Virtuals running around working for the : Redstone Empire? or Pacifica?
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