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	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2
	Posted By: scratskinner	Date: 11/17/17 2:40 a.m.
	In Response To: Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 (Forrest of B.org) : (snipped) : (snipped) : Why could Tom and Xiu's magic bodies just be destroyed like that, but attacks : on the Demons don't slowly reduce their numbers? (Maybe Tom and Xiu : couldn't defend themselves because it was a sneak attack on them, but the : Demons can? Maybe they are being destroyed, but since they control the : facilities where bodies are made now, they can just make new bodies as : need be? But then sealing off the portal from Sol should eventually do the : trick...) Sue and Tom self-identify as things in need of preservation, and will eventually succumb to efforts to destroy them. (Though their particular case may have caveats - wonder if their bodies being completely destroyed should cause them to pop back into the real world?) Demons self-identify as if they are destruction, and thus attempts at destruction will simply become part of them. (Plus, have you ever tried shooting a cloud?) : How exactly can the Queen control the Demons in the real world, e.g. to keep : them from just destroying Virtuality in their rage? (She can corral them : with Darklight in Virtuality, and I guess she could "unplug" the : ones that disobey in reality maybe? That wouldn't give her the ability to : make them make more magic bodies or anything technical like that, since : they're just mindless rage monsters even if she can put them on a leash.) Perhaps, in anticipation of Kron's fleet, Metis had made sure that the bodies themselves worked as Virtuality nodes, and could sustain it? And/or the Queen of Hell simply makes sure they cannot sense things in reality, and arranges things in Virtuality to correspond to their desired impact on reality? : (snipped) : I originally envisioned what eventually became the Demons as a kind of grey : goo scenario (except more like black smoke instead), consuming the : universe to make more and more of themselves, which lead to the : catastrophe that requires entropy-defeating magic technology to overcome : (if you fight that kind of fire with fire you just burn down the whole : world, so you need some kind of un-burning counter-weapon), but now with : them as just magical projections of individual beings what the hell : exactly is going on with them consuming the universe for power now? The : Queen could let them actually download into their magical bodies and : replicate in the real world and make an actual grey goo scenario, which : would fit with her omnicidal objectives, but then for story purposes just : killing Xio wouldn't fix that, so what's my excuse for why she doesn't : just do that, but how can that excuse still permit a grey-goo-like : scenario except with that single point of failure in Xio? She hates Xio, and won't let him die until he's seen everything he's cared about and could ever care about annihilated. And the grey goo scenario might prevent him from being able to see it through the senses of all the countless Demons (in perfect HD!), by virtue of their connection to Virtuality no longer being assured. And she's routing it all through him, for that precise reason, to ensure he can't avoid it. : Keius Meij has previously, in his very first story, telepathically : manipulated people across the whole galaxy, and Amouch has done similar in : his stories, and Keius has even manipulated people's nanites over those : kinds of ranges (albeit through individuals he had already manipulated : being in proximity to the new people being manipulated), so why does : anyone need to go visit Niarba to talk to Keius or get special powers from : him, why can't he just telepathically turn everyone in the galaxy into : entropy-defying wizards and make them defeat the demons and then take : their powers away again? Why didn't he do that to stop Kron et al in the : first place? Or to stop the Berol, either in the second war or way back in : the first one? The only answer I have is "because that would make a : shitty story", like having Superman solve all problems by turning : back time a day and nabbing the bad guy out of bed the night before the : crime. But in-story, why not? I was going to suggest he have a similar "my judgement is terrible" thing a la Oron, but it looks like you were thinking along those lines yourself. : I'm not sure which "original" ending you're thinking of, since : there've been so many. Was one of them particularly bad? (Is the current : one bad? I thought some people hated it...) Proto-Eternal might have rung more bells. I think it involved walking off into the sunset? : Yeah I did, although I also felt a little disappointed in myself there, like : there just wasn't as much substance to that really cool idea I wanted to : write as I originally thought there was. I kinda feel that way about a lot : of the Chronicles actually. When I started this project I expected I would : mostly be writing down stuff that I already had in my head, but more and : more I've been realizing how little I actually had in my head, besides : broad gestures with all the details just kinda implicit and : "obvious". I've ended up thinking up more new stuff while : "writing down 20 years of thoughts" than I actually thought up : in those 20 years, and a lot of it just feels like filler. (Although there : are still a lot of details I came up with over that time that I've only : skimmed over for this phase, e.g. the different sapient primitives on : Asira are all fleshed out, as well as a lot of nonsapient wildlife, : because those were all to be units in that first game design that started : all of this off). Basically all of the Otherworld, Nurbal, and Resurgent : stuff was written from whole cloth as I went through it, having only the : vaguest ideas for what generally happens in those parts of those story : before I sat down to write this summary. So is that Asira stuff going in a tech note somewhere? : I really enjoyed writing Pantheon Genesis. That was always one of my favorite : parts of the story. It was also really easy because it's basically taking : a bunch of existing stories from real world mythologies, giving them : sci-fi explanations, and tying them together. For some reason, I have this mental image of you moving religious figurines around in the air and making pew-pew noises. : I'm not sure I understand the question. I was under the (apparently mistaken) impression that this had been backstory for an MMO or something. I was being kind of silly with the half-whatever bit, (which I had originally wanted to play as an RPG joke), but the gist is: which bits will be most popular with children when (in-universe) these Chronicles are compiled/recounted? (or just most popular?) (Alternately, which bit is General-RADIX most interested in illustrating, should he be reading this?)

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	The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	8/24/17 10:00 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	General-RADIX	8/25/17 4:53 a.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	General-RADIX	8/25/17 10:26 a.m.
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	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	General-RADIX	8/25/17 11:31 a.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	8/25/17 11:37 a.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	8/25/17 8:45 p.m.
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	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	8/25/17 10:53 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	8/25/17 11:36 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva — MMOSs	Can-ned Food	8/26/17 7:40 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	General-RADIX	8/26/17 5:10 p.m.
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	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	8/27/17 1:13 p.m.
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	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Can-ned Food	8/26/17 6:36 p.m.
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	Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 1	scratskinner	9/7/17 9:24 p.m.
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	Re: Nurbal Colony	Can-ned Food	9/8/17 1:42 p.m.
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	Re: Nurbal Colony	irons	9/19/17 2:11 p.m.
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	Re: Sol Resurgent: Part 3	scratskinner	10/19/17 10:45 p.m.
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	Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3	scratskinner	11/7/17 9:05 p.m.
	Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	11/7/17 9:20 p.m.
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	Virtuality Immanent: Part 1	Forrest of B.org	11/14/17 8:55 p.m.
	Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	11/15/17 9:03 p.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	scratskinner	11/16/17 1:46 a.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	11/16/17 1:20 p.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	scratskinner	11/17/17 2:40 a.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	11/17/17 4:00 p.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	VikingBoyBilly	11/17/17 5:57 p.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	11/17/17 10:08 p.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	VikingBoyBilly	11/18/17 2:35 a.m.
	Re: Eternal stuff	Forrest of B.org	11/20/17 10:02 a.m.
	Re: Eternal stuff	VikingBoyBilly	11/20/17 2:27 p.m.
	Re: Eternal stuff	General-RADIX	11/20/17 6:32 p.m.
	Re: Eternal stuff	Forrest of B.org	11/20/17 8:21 p.m.
	Re: Eternal stuff	General-RADIX	11/20/17 9:19 p.m.
	Re: Eternal stuff	VikingBoyBilly	11/22/17 1:46 p.m.
	Re: Eternal stuff	General-RADIX	11/22/17 3:30 p.m.
	Re: Eternal stuff	nevets01	11/25/17 4:37 a.m.
	Re: Eternal stuff	PerseusSpartacus	11/25/17 10:14 a.m.
	Re: Eternal stuff	Forrest of B.org	11/26/17 9:25 p.m.
	Re: Eternal stuff	General-RADIX	11/26/17 10:21 p.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	scratskinner	11/18/17 3:39 a.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	11/20/17 10:33 a.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 3c	scratskinner	11/22/17 7:20 a.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 3c	Forrest of B.org	11/22/17 9:54 a.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	General-RADIX	11/18/17 6:37 p.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	Forrest of B.org	11/20/17 10:40 a.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2	General-RADIX	11/20/17 1:51 p.m.
	Virtuality Immanent: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	11/16/17 9:57 p.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3	scratskinner	11/17/17 12:38 a.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3	General-RADIX	11/17/17 7:15 a.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3	VikingBoyBilly	11/17/17 12:35 p.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	11/17/17 3:23 p.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3	VikingBoyBilly	11/17/17 6:06 p.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3	Forrest of B.org	11/17/17 10:05 p.m.
	Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3	nevets01	11/17/17 12:46 p.m.
	The Chronicles of Quelouva are DONE! (ish)	Forrest of B.org	12/29/17 8:31 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva are DONE! (ish)	General-RADIX	12/30/17 1:47 a.m.
	some random thoughts	scratskinner	9/9/17 12:29 a.m.
	Re: some random thoughts	Forrest of B.org	9/9/17 8:40 a.m.
	Re: some random thoughts	scratskinner	9/10/17 2:19 a.m.
	Re: some random thoughts	Forrest of B.org	9/11/17 9:35 a.m.
	Re: some random thoughts	scratskinner	9/12/17 5:14 p.m.
	Re: some random thoughts	Forrest of B.org	9/12/17 6:24 p.m.
	Re: some random thoughts	scratskinner	9/14/17 7:53 p.m.
	Re: some random thoughts	Forrest of B.org	9/14/17 10:13 p.m.
	Re: some random thoughts	scratskinner	9/16/17 11:01 a.m.
	Re: some random thoughts	Forrest of B.org	9/16/17 2:56 p.m.
	Re: some random thoughts	scratskinner	9/17/17 12:13 p.m.
	Re: some random thoughts	Forrest of B.org	9/18/17 8:10 a.m.
	Re: some random thoughts 2b	scratskinner	9/16/17 9:12 a.m.
	Re: some random thoughts 2b	Forrest of B.org	9/16/17 2:58 p.m.
	Re: some random thoughts 2b	scratskinner	9/17/17 12:31 p.m.
	Re: some random thoughts 2b	Forrest of B.org	9/18/17 7:41 a.m.
	Re: some random thoughts	Forrest of B.org	9/11/17 3:37 p.m.
	Re: some random thoughts	Forrest of B.org	9/14/17 1:55 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	General-RADIX	9/11/17 8:02 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	9/28/17 9:43 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	9/30/17 1:11 a.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	10/2/17 9:56 a.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	10/7/17 12:53 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	10/9/17 3:14 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	10/17/17 6:38 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	10/17/17 8:23 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Tycho	10/22/17 4:14 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	nevets01	10/23/17 7:42 a.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	10/23/17 10:41 a.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	10/26/17 10:49 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	10/27/17 1:34 a.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	10/27/17 8:32 a.m.
	Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 *MOVED*	scratskinner	11/9/17 10:50 p.m.
	Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 *MOVED*	Forrest of B.org	11/10/17 8:39 a.m.
	Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 *MOVED*	scratskinner	12/21/17 12:48 p.m.
	noticed you've updated while doing some factchecks	scratskinner	12/21/17 2:26 p.m.
	Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 *MOVED*	Forrest of B.org	12/21/17 3:48 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	11/22/17 12:18 p.m.
	Future Perfect expanded	Forrest of B.org	11/29/17 10:00 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	12/7/17 9:30 a.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	General-RADIX	12/7/17 9:43 a.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	12/7/17 10:24 a.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	12/8/17 7:22 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	12/9/17 8:19 a.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	12/13/17 9:10 a.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	General-RADIX	12/13/17 3:18 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Yossarian	12/15/17 9:58 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	scratskinner	12/16/17 1:22 p.m.
	Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva	Forrest of B.org	12/18/17 12:56 p.m.

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