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Posted By: scratskinner | Date: 10/7/17 12:53 p.m. | |
In Response To: Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva (Forrest of B.org) : I noted the part when Oron freezes and drops out of communication to Pantheon
I see it has replaced the bit where he won't talk because he felt his opinion was demonstrably unhelpful. I feel that bit ought to be preserved, as it's a nice bit of character development. Perhaps you could have someone earlier on having worried the freezing thing happened, and being met with "No, I ain't frozen solid. Yet. I just don't want to make things worse by opening my fool mouth again." It could even be that being involved in planetside affairs was helping keep him conscious, and once that stopped... : I noted why Thomas was looking for the Gem of Fire in Meantime of the
It occurs to me that someone might wonder why he didn't entrust it to the elves, and that there are quite a few reasons not: it was the Elf King's idea to hide the Gems in caves, and Tom/Sue aren't supposed to know; the elves are likely to protect the Gem as well as the cave would, that is, only up till it's found; he didn't actually know where the elves were hanging out; he doesn't have a lead-lined box or whatever to safely transport the Gem to the elves, cause it's not like they're going to come get it themselves. It also occurs to me to wonder whether he tried getting some wizard to come on an "innocent" hike with him, thus framing it as a harmless diversion rather than a perilous enterprise that might not be worth their effort, and shoving their hands onto the Gem at the first opportunity. (Why would he need an expedition, after all?) : That's a good catch. My first thought was "well, Vis doesn't necessarily
: My next thought is that there's a detail of the game Fire and Ice set up
: So I guess my earlier statements that Tom and Sue would have known better are
That's a good save. And even Tom in full possession of his memories wouldn't have known that her crazy had already survived multiple suicides. If you haven't already, you should probably note this when Murdock arrives at Vis' castle. (I think, maybe, that there's another knowable reason to not bring back the Queen of Hell, and this might come after Vis has already answered Murdock's objection of "the Eldest's love was nuts!", cut off before he can fully voice it by Vis declaring she's explained herself to the extent she feels necessary, and that everything's gonna be just fine. But that's a maybe.) Wonder how things would have fallen apart if she had been (kinda) right. Has Vis considered that the Queen of Hell might not have the memories of her old life readily available due to the typical effects of reincarnation? (Given her heavy infiltration of Chalmony, she might be prepared to do dream analysis.) And even with memories intact... How varied are the ways in which Vis might be disastrously misled by the Queen of Hell? Come to think of it, given that the ice/fire goddesses thought to have safeguards in their gems against someone using their own power against them, seems a bit odd they went the whole "yes this will make you a superbeing" route. Of course, perhaps they were counting on her losing her memory to rebirth, and hence her knowledge of the Sword of Darklight and how to get back at them. And the Gems, apparently, safeguard only against their own type... how active are the goddesses in mortal affairs? It would be ironic, and a nice hint of the limits on their foresight, if one or both of them'd been overthrown (by the bearer of the opposing gem) long before the Queen of Hell took aim at their respective houses. : I'm a little unclear on what you're asking here, but if it helps answer it, I
I think there's a jumble of questions I'm asking here. One part:
another part is:
And another:
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The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 8/24/17 10:00 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | General-RADIX | 8/25/17 4:53 a.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | General-RADIX | 8/25/17 10:26 a.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 8/25/17 11:06 a.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | General-RADIX | 8/25/17 11:31 a.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 8/25/17 11:37 a.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | scratskinner | 8/25/17 8:45 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 8/25/17 9:47 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | scratskinner | 8/25/17 10:53 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 8/25/17 11:36 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva — MMOSs | Can-ned Food | 8/26/17 7:40 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | General-RADIX | 8/26/17 5:10 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 8/27/17 8:01 a.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | scratskinner | 8/27/17 1:13 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 8/27/17 6:22 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Can-ned Food | 8/26/17 6:36 p.m. | |
Nurbal Colony: Part 1 | Forrest of B.org | 9/6/17 9:45 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 1 | Forrest of B.org | 9/7/17 8:28 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 1 | scratskinner | 9/7/17 9:24 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 1 | Forrest of B.org | 9/7/17 9:50 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Colony | Can-ned Food | 9/8/17 1:42 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Colony | irons | 9/15/17 2:53 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Colony | Forrest of B.org | 9/18/17 1:26 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Colony | irons | 9/19/17 2:11 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 9/8/17 8:59 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3 | General-RADIX | 9/8/17 9:59 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 9/8/17 10:44 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3 | VikingBoyBilly | 9/9/17 7:52 a.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 9/9/17 8:13 a.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3 | VikingBoyBilly | 9/9/17 3:18 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 9/9/17 3:56 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 9/11/17 4:00 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3 | VikingBoyBilly | 9/15/17 3:29 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Colony: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 9/19/17 3:11 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Legacy: Part 1 | Forrest of B.org | 9/12/17 10:12 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Legacy: Part 1 | General-RADIX | 9/12/17 11:17 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Legacy: Part 2 | Forrest of B.org | 9/13/17 10:06 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Legacy: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 9/14/17 9:51 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Legacy: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 9/19/17 2:35 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Enemy: Part 2 | Forrest of B.org | 9/19/17 10:28 p.m. | |
Re: Nurbal Enemy: Part 2 | Forrest of B.org | 9/20/17 7:48 p.m. | |
Columbia Resurgent: Part 1 | Forrest of B.org | 10/3/17 9:15 p.m. | |
Re: Columbia Resurgent: Part 2 | Forrest of B.org | 10/4/17 9:29 p.m. | |
Re: Columbia Resurgent: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 10/5/17 9:32 p.m. | |
Re: Columbia Resurgent: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 10/10/17 9:57 p.m. | |
Terra Resurgent: Part 2 | Forrest of B.org | 10/11/17 9:36 p.m. | |
Re: Terra Resurgent: Part 2 | scratskinner | 10/12/17 12:22 p.m. | |
Re: Terra Resurgent: Part 2 | Forrest of B.org | 10/12/17 12:24 p.m. | |
Terra Resurgent: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 10/12/17 9:31 p.m. | |
Sol Resurgent: Part 1 | Forrest of B.org | 10/17/17 10:37 p.m. | |
Sol Resurgent: Part 2 | Forrest of B.org | 10/18/17 10:09 p.m. | |
Sol Resurgent: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 10/19/17 9:49 p.m. | |
Re: Sol Resurgent: Part 3 | scratskinner | 10/19/17 10:45 p.m. | |
Re: Sol Resurgent: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 10/19/17 11:24 p.m. | |
Virtuality Transcendent: Part 1 | Forrest of B.org | 10/30/17 10:10 p.m. | |
Virtuality Transcendent: Part 2 | Forrest of B.org | 10/31/17 9:31 p.m. | |
Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 11/1/17 9:52 p.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 | scratskinner | 11/7/17 9:05 p.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 11/7/17 9:20 p.m. | |
Virtuality Incarnate: Part 1 | Forrest of B.org | 11/7/17 9:08 p.m. | |
Virtuality Incarnate: Part 2 | Forrest of B.org | 11/8/17 8:25 p.m. | |
Virtuality Incarnate: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 11/9/17 8:55 p.m. | |
Virtuality Immanent: Part 1 | Forrest of B.org | 11/14/17 8:55 p.m. | |
Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 | Forrest of B.org | 11/15/17 9:03 p.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 | scratskinner | 11/16/17 1:46 a.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 | Forrest of B.org | 11/16/17 1:20 p.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 | scratskinner | 11/17/17 2:40 a.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 | Forrest of B.org | 11/17/17 4:00 p.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 | VikingBoyBilly | 11/17/17 5:57 p.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 | Forrest of B.org | 11/17/17 10:08 p.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 | VikingBoyBilly | 11/18/17 2:35 a.m. | |
Re: Eternal stuff | Forrest of B.org | 11/20/17 10:02 a.m. | |
Re: Eternal stuff | VikingBoyBilly | 11/20/17 2:27 p.m. | |
Re: Eternal stuff | General-RADIX | 11/20/17 6:32 p.m. | |
Re: Eternal stuff | Forrest of B.org | 11/20/17 8:21 p.m. | |
Re: Eternal stuff | General-RADIX | 11/20/17 9:19 p.m. | |
Re: Eternal stuff | VikingBoyBilly | 11/22/17 1:46 p.m. | |
Re: Eternal stuff | General-RADIX | 11/22/17 3:30 p.m. | |
Re: Eternal stuff | nevets01 | 11/25/17 4:37 a.m. | |
Re: Eternal stuff | PerseusSpartacus | 11/25/17 10:14 a.m. | |
Re: Eternal stuff | Forrest of B.org | 11/26/17 9:25 p.m. | |
Re: Eternal stuff | General-RADIX | 11/26/17 10:21 p.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 | scratskinner | 11/18/17 3:39 a.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 | Forrest of B.org | 11/20/17 10:33 a.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 3c | scratskinner | 11/22/17 7:20 a.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 3c | Forrest of B.org | 11/22/17 9:54 a.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 | General-RADIX | 11/18/17 6:37 p.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 | Forrest of B.org | 11/20/17 10:40 a.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 2 | General-RADIX | 11/20/17 1:51 p.m. | |
Virtuality Immanent: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 11/16/17 9:57 p.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3 | scratskinner | 11/17/17 12:38 a.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3 | General-RADIX | 11/17/17 7:15 a.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3 | VikingBoyBilly | 11/17/17 12:35 p.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 11/17/17 3:23 p.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3 | VikingBoyBilly | 11/17/17 6:06 p.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3 | Forrest of B.org | 11/17/17 10:05 p.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Immanent: Part 3 | nevets01 | 11/17/17 12:46 p.m. | |
The Chronicles of Quelouva are DONE! (ish) | Forrest of B.org | 12/29/17 8:31 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva are DONE! (ish) | General-RADIX | 12/30/17 1:47 a.m. | |
some random thoughts | scratskinner | 9/9/17 12:29 a.m. | |
Re: some random thoughts | Forrest of B.org | 9/9/17 8:40 a.m. | |
Re: some random thoughts | scratskinner | 9/10/17 2:19 a.m. | |
Re: some random thoughts | Forrest of B.org | 9/11/17 9:35 a.m. | |
Re: some random thoughts | scratskinner | 9/12/17 5:14 p.m. | |
Re: some random thoughts | Forrest of B.org | 9/12/17 6:24 p.m. | |
Re: some random thoughts | scratskinner | 9/14/17 7:53 p.m. | |
Re: some random thoughts | Forrest of B.org | 9/14/17 10:13 p.m. | |
Re: some random thoughts | scratskinner | 9/16/17 11:01 a.m. | |
Re: some random thoughts | Forrest of B.org | 9/16/17 2:56 p.m. | |
Re: some random thoughts | scratskinner | 9/17/17 12:13 p.m. | |
Re: some random thoughts | Forrest of B.org | 9/18/17 8:10 a.m. | |
Re: some random thoughts 2b | scratskinner | 9/16/17 9:12 a.m. | |
Re: some random thoughts 2b | Forrest of B.org | 9/16/17 2:58 p.m. | |
Re: some random thoughts 2b | scratskinner | 9/17/17 12:31 p.m. | |
Re: some random thoughts 2b | Forrest of B.org | 9/18/17 7:41 a.m. | |
Re: some random thoughts | Forrest of B.org | 9/11/17 3:37 p.m. | |
Re: some random thoughts | Forrest of B.org | 9/14/17 1:55 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | General-RADIX | 9/11/17 8:02 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 9/28/17 9:43 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | scratskinner | 9/30/17 1:11 a.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 10/2/17 9:56 a.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | scratskinner | 10/7/17 12:53 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 10/9/17 3:14 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | scratskinner | 10/17/17 6:38 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 10/17/17 8:23 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Tycho | 10/22/17 4:14 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | nevets01 | 10/23/17 7:42 a.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 10/23/17 10:41 a.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 10/26/17 10:49 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | scratskinner | 10/27/17 1:34 a.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 10/27/17 8:32 a.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 *MOVED* | scratskinner | 11/9/17 10:50 p.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 *MOVED* | Forrest of B.org | 11/10/17 8:39 a.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 *MOVED* | scratskinner | 12/21/17 12:48 p.m. | |
noticed you've updated while doing some factchecks | scratskinner | 12/21/17 2:26 p.m. | |
Re: Virtuality Transcendent: Part 3 *MOVED* | Forrest of B.org | 12/21/17 3:48 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 11/22/17 12:18 p.m. | |
Future Perfect expanded | Forrest of B.org | 11/29/17 10:00 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 12/7/17 9:30 a.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | General-RADIX | 12/7/17 9:43 a.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 12/7/17 10:24 a.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | scratskinner | 12/8/17 7:22 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 12/9/17 8:19 a.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 12/13/17 9:10 a.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | General-RADIX | 12/13/17 3:18 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Yossarian | 12/15/17 9:58 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | scratskinner | 12/16/17 1:22 p.m. | |
Re: The Chronicles of Quelouva | Forrest of B.org | 12/18/17 12:56 p.m. |
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