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1st review

Posted By: Destiny Date: 8/2/10 6:10 a.m.
In Response To: Re: A DEMO OUT OF NOWHERE! (Lawstiker)

: I have only played the first level and a little bit of the second level, and
: I have to say I've liked it so far. Its nice to pop out M1A1 again. I'll
: continue to play the rest of it when I get time. Keep up the good work,
: nice to see someone else working on a scenario.
Thanks for your comment. This is the first review posted on Simplici7y.
Currently 2/5 Stars.
Not particularly fun...
DADDY Z3RO on Aug 2nd 2010, Version v0.1
Your scenario had a number of major flaws that lead to it's downfall, example one being the ceiling heights, they are all locked at one height, the lighting, it's dull and needs more shading, texturing is repetitive and enemy placement-ammo ratio is pretty god awful, i mean, on the first level, we are forced to fight off several fighters with fists.
You need to try and improve, and I admire you for using M1A1, and you even figured out how to make terminals, which I still don't know how to properly make.
I'm not sure how to work lighting with Forge so I gotta steal most of them from other scenarios. I never really gave the story so I suppose I should tell people WHY YOU START WITH NOTHING. You timetraveled to a spaceship and your from the year 2010. You find a shield protection suit from a barrel in the hangar. You don't have full shielding in the suit and there wasn't any gun in any of the barrels.
Rather not give the full story cause I haven't typed up the full story yet.
I'm going to try my best to give some more ammo for as many monsters there are.
*spoiler*
Remember that Durandal did come from a colony that had a lot of guns and ammo.

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Finished the Demo... Lawstiker 8/2/10 9:50 p.m.

Re: Finished the Demo... Destiny 8/3/10 5:52 a.m.

Re: Finished the Demo... chiasaur11 8/3/10 9:38 p.m.

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Project Dave Destiny 8/21/10 9:53 a.m.

50 downloads! *NM* Destiny 8/21/10 2:23 p.m.

Project Dave Destiny 8/23/10 3:06 p.m.

Re: Project Dave treellama 8/24/10 12:16 p.m.

Re: Project Dave Destiny 8/24/10 3:53 p.m.

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Re: Project Dave elliott 8/31/10 1:29 p.m.

Re: Project Dave Destiny 8/31/10 2:07 p.m.

Project Dave Destiny 8/31/10 2:57 p.m.

Project Dave *LINK* Destiny 9/6/10 4:33 p.m.

Bad news.... *LINK* Destiny 9/29/10 9:59 a.m.

Re: Project Dave elliott 9/3/10 3:13 p.m.

Re: Project Dave Destiny 9/3/10 3:28 p.m.

Re: Project Dave elliott 9/3/10 4:50 p.m.

Re: Project Dave Destiny 9/3/10 5:12 p.m.

Re: Project Dave *NM* elliott 9/3/10 5:43 p.m.

WOO!!!! Destiny 9/4/10 4:53 a.m.

oops, I meant to post this elliott 9/3/10 7:00 p.m.

Re: Finished the Demo... Lawstiker 8/5/10 8:23 a.m.

Re: Finished the Demo... Destiny 8/5/10 11:05 a.m.

Update Xana's Roadie 2/9/11 11:53 a.m.

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: Thanks for your comment. This is the first review posted on Simplici7y. : Currently 2/5 Stars. : Not particularly fun... : DADDY Z3RO on Aug 2nd 2010, Version v0.1 : Your scenario had a number of major flaws that lead to it's downfall, example : one being the ceiling heights, they are all locked at one height, the : lighting, it's dull and needs more shading, texturing is repetitive and : enemy placement-ammo ratio is pretty god awful, i mean, on the first : level, we are forced to fight off several fighters with fists. : You need to try and improve, and I admire you for using M1A1, and you even : figured out how to make terminals, which I still don't know how to : properly make. : I'm not sure how to work lighting with Forge so I gotta steal most of them : from other scenarios. I never really gave the story so I suppose I should : tell people WHY YOU START WITH NOTHING. You timetraveled to a spaceship : and your from the year 2010. You find a shield protection suit from a : barrel in the hangar. You don't have full shielding in the suit and there : wasn't any gun in any of the barrels. : Rather not give the full story cause I haven't typed up the full story yet. : I'm going to try my best to give some more ammo for as many monsters there : are. : *spoiler* : Remember that Durandal did come from a colony that had a lot of guns and : ammo.

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possible scenario	Destiny	7/3/10 3:42 a.m.
Projects	Destiny	7/28/10 4:17 p.m.
Re: Projects	Nicholai	7/28/10 8:39 p.m.
Re: Projects	Destiny	7/30/10 2:42 p.m.
Re: Projects	Tycho	7/30/10 7:19 p.m.
A DEMO OUT OF NOWHERE!	Destiny	7/31/10 3:41 p.m.
Re: A DEMO OUT OF NOWHERE!	Lawstiker	8/1/10 7:55 p.m.
1st review	Destiny	8/2/10 6:10 a.m.
Re: 1st review	Lawstiker	8/2/10 11:29 a.m.
Re: 1st review	Destiny	8/2/10 3:19 p.m.
Finished the Demo...	Lawstiker	8/2/10 9:50 p.m.
Re: Finished the Demo...	Destiny	8/3/10 5:52 a.m.
Re: Finished the Demo...	chiasaur11	8/3/10 9:38 p.m.
Project Dave	Destiny	8/4/10 6:12 a.m.
Project Dave	Destiny	8/7/10 5:27 a.m.
Re: Project Dave	chiasaur11	8/11/10 9:43 p.m.
Re: Project Dave	Destiny	8/12/10 7:11 a.m.
Project Dave	Destiny	8/14/10 6:35 a.m.
Project Dave	Destiny	8/21/10 9:53 a.m.
50 downloads! NM	Destiny	8/21/10 2:23 p.m.
Project Dave	Destiny	8/23/10 3:06 p.m.
Re: Project Dave	treellama	8/24/10 12:16 p.m.
Re: Project Dave	Destiny	8/24/10 3:53 p.m.
Project Dave	Destiny	8/29/10 4:46 p.m.
Re: Project Dave	elliott	8/31/10 1:29 p.m.
Re: Project Dave	Destiny	8/31/10 2:07 p.m.
Project Dave	Destiny	8/31/10 2:57 p.m.
Project Dave LINK	Destiny	9/6/10 4:33 p.m.
Bad news.... LINK	Destiny	9/29/10 9:59 a.m.
Re: Project Dave	elliott	9/3/10 3:13 p.m.
Re: Project Dave	Destiny	9/3/10 3:28 p.m.
Re: Project Dave	elliott	9/3/10 4:50 p.m.
Re: Project Dave	Destiny	9/3/10 5:12 p.m.
Re: Project Dave NM	elliott	9/3/10 5:43 p.m.
WOO!!!!	Destiny	9/4/10 4:53 a.m.
oops, I meant to post this	elliott	9/3/10 7:00 p.m.
Re: Finished the Demo...	Lawstiker	8/5/10 8:23 a.m.
Re: Finished the Demo...	Destiny	8/5/10 11:05 a.m.
Update	Xana's Roadie	2/9/11 11:53 a.m.



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	Message: : Thanks for your comment. This is the first review posted on Simplici7y. : Currently 2/5 Stars. : Not particularly fun... : DADDY Z3RO on Aug 2nd 2010, Version v0.1 : Your scenario had a number of major flaws that lead to it's downfall, example : one being the ceiling heights, they are all locked at one height, the : lighting, it's dull and needs more shading, texturing is repetitive and : enemy placement-ammo ratio is pretty god awful, i mean, on the first : level, we are forced to fight off several fighters with fists. : You need to try and improve, and I admire you for using M1A1, and you even : figured out how to make terminals, which I still don't know how to : properly make. : I'm not sure how to work lighting with Forge so I gotta steal most of them : from other scenarios. I never really gave the story so I suppose I should : tell people WHY YOU START WITH NOTHING. You timetraveled to a spaceship : and your from the year 2010. You find a shield protection suit from a : barrel in the hangar. You don't have full shielding in the suit and there : wasn't any gun in any of the barrels. : Rather not give the full story cause I haven't typed up the full story yet. : I'm going to try my best to give some more ammo for as many monsters there : are. : spoiler : Remember that Durandal did come from a colony that had a lot of guns and : ammo.
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