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Re: Eternal X Tour of Duty Chapter 2 Stage 1
Posted By: Lion O CyborgDate: 5/2/19 12:13 a.m.

In Response To: Re: Eternal X Tour of Duty Chapter 2 Stage 1 (VikingBoyBilly)

: Your writing has greatly improved with 97% of the fanfiction expunged from
: it. I love some of the games you reference, but when I don't get it, the
: stuff's like the equivalent to pop culture references in bad teen movies.
: It's good in small doses. Didn't know about how the phobos sky was made
: (and they were gonna go with a black skybox like doom64/marathon? It
: wouldn't be right)

: I haven't even started playing yet, and I don't do scratchstarts, so it will
: take me a while to write the evil tycho failure timeline. I have a good
: idea where to start; like all of this is fishy, with all the sledgehammery
: clues that something's wrong with tycho, and tycho's new plan doesn't add
: up when he's trying to set a trap by making a second exit, one that's
: less useful than the first (travel across time where nobody can chase me,
: or stick myself in this suspiciously empty ship? I don't see anybody with
: a brain picking the latter)

: I remember those levels being all gray and silver, and couldn't recognize
: those screenshots at first. I totally forgot those areas were supposed to
: be pfhor ships/cities, so it's a good move that they retextured that. I
: can't wait to see it. And the rain.

: And like i said, school is holding me back. But you can keep making writeups
: ahead of time so we can spit them out quickly after I catch up.

Thanks. The Lucas version of stage 2 is done (for my log only and cue cards as I said before) so I can write stage 3 while i wait for the canon version of stage 2.

The fan fic-y parts are more at their worst in the later dream levels and maybe chapter 5. References to pre-Battleroid Hathor may be down from before. Personally I eqate pop culture references I don't get more to Duke Nukem, as he does that all the time in 3D onward and most of them fly over my head until I look up the games.

Later levels have ash, embers and snow from what I read on Lia's page for the rain map.

Can't wait to see stage 2. I hope you enjoy the game in all paths. I wish you luck with school. :)

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Eternal X Tour of Duty Chapter 2 Stage 1Lion O Cyborg 4/30/19 9:48 a.m.
     Re: Eternal X Tour of Duty Chapter 2 Stage 1VikingBoyBilly 5/1/19 3:59 p.m.
           Re: Eternal X Tour of Duty Chapter 2 Stage 1Lion O Cyborg 5/2/19 12:13 a.m.
                 Re: Eternal X Tour of Duty Chapter 2 Stage 1VikingBoyBilly 5/3/19 2:55 p.m.
                       Re: Eternal X Tour of Duty Chapter 2 Stage 1VikingBoyBilly 5/6/19 12:27 p.m.
                             Re: Eternal X Tour of Duty Chapter 2 Stage 1Lion O Cyborg 5/7/19 2:51 a.m.
                                   Re: Eternal X Tour of Duty Chapter 2 Stage 1VikingBoyBilly 5/7/19 12:45 p.m.
                       Re: Eternal X Tour of Duty Chapter 2 Stage 1Lion O Cyborg 5/7/19 2:42 a.m.
                             Re: Eternal X Tour of Duty Chapter 2 Stage 1VikingBoyBilly 5/7/19 12:47 p.m.
                                   Re: Eternal X Tour of Duty Chapter 2 Stage 1Lion O Cyborg 5/7/19 2:47 p.m.

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