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| Re: Wow, this is really kickin' up! | |
| Posted By: padraig08 <padraig08@live.com> | Date: 8/9/11 7:36 p.m. |
In Response To: Re: Wow, this is really kickin' up! (Leviathan) : What sentences are you referring to? I actually had a handful of folks read : through these four pages before posting since I often spend too long : looking at these pages that I can't discern ANY meaning from the sentences : after a certain point, let alone find typos in them. Those mistakes should : all be fixed now. : Neat little note: the ODST Sergeant (red stripes) is actually wearing the
Just a few small ones (could be intentional for all I know.) On page 49, Halsey says "We will hole up deep inside this mountain", thought you meant "hold up" And on page 51, I'm not sure how "Captain -Protect Me-" is supposed to be read. As "Captain Protect Me" or as "Captain, Protect Me" That's all that caught my attention.
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| A Fistful of Arrows (pages 48-51) | Leviathan | 8/9/11 6:09 p.m. |
| Re: A Fistful of Arrows (pages 48-51) | DEEP NNN | 8/9/11 6:15 p.m. |
| Great work as usual! *NM* | Elzarthebam | 8/9/11 6:16 p.m. |
| Why isn't there more? *NM* | CortanaVII | 8/9/11 6:16 p.m. |
| After this, there's no places to stop! *NM* | Leviathan | 8/9/11 6:27 p.m. |
| Heh... | Louis Wu | 8/9/11 6:29 p.m. |
| Exactly! *NM* | CortanaVII | 8/9/11 6:30 p.m. |
| Re: Heh... | SonofMacPhisto | 8/9/11 8:32 p.m. |
| CanhazReconz PLZKTHXBAI!NM *NM* | Laird | 8/9/11 6:19 p.m. |
| ODST in Recon | SonGoharotto | 8/9/11 6:19 p.m. |
| Re: ODST in Recon | Leviathan | 8/9/11 6:24 p.m. |
| Re: ODST in Recon | Laird | 8/9/11 6:31 p.m. |
| Re: ODST in Recon | Overdoziz | 8/9/11 7:17 p.m. |
| Re: ODST in Recon | SonofMacPhisto | 8/9/11 8:37 p.m. |
| Re: ODST in Recon | Bry | 8/9/11 8:44 p.m. |
| Re: ODST in Recon | SonofMacPhisto | 8/9/11 8:48 p.m. |
| Re: ODST in Recon | Bry | 8/9/11 8:56 p.m. |
| The team... | Leviathan | 8/10/11 12:01 a.m. |
| Re: ODST in Recon | Laird | 8/9/11 11:01 p.m. |
| Re: ODST in Recon | SonGoharotto | 8/10/11 7:42 p.m. |
| Re: A Fistful of Arrows (pages 48-51) | Raaascal | 8/9/11 6:29 p.m. |
| Almost TOO good. | BlueNinja | 8/9/11 6:48 p.m. |
| Wow, this is really kickin' up! | padraig08 | 8/9/11 6:54 p.m. |
| Re: Wow, this is really kickin' up! | Leviathan | 8/9/11 7:20 p.m. |
| Re: Wow, this is really kickin' up! | Bry | 8/9/11 7:23 p.m. |
| Re: Wow, this is really kickin' up! | Leviathan | 8/9/11 7:27 p.m. |
| Re: Wow, this is really kickin' up! | padraig08 | 8/9/11 7:36 p.m. |
| Re: Wow, this is really kickin' up! | Bry | 8/9/11 7:44 p.m. |
| Re: Wow, this is really kickin' up! | Louis Wu | 8/9/11 7:46 p.m. |
| Re: Wow, this is really kickin' up! | Leviathan | 8/9/11 8:10 p.m. |
| Re: Wow, this is really kickin' up! | Bry | 8/9/11 8:15 p.m. |
| Ooops... | Leviathan | 8/9/11 8:23 p.m. |
| Heh | Louis Wu | 8/9/11 8:43 p.m. |
| Re: Wow, this is really kickin' up! | padraig08 | 8/9/11 8:49 p.m. |
| Re: Wow, this is really kickin' up! | CaneCutter | 8/9/11 8:07 p.m. |
| Re: Wow, this is really kickin' up! | Leviathan | 8/9/11 8:09 p.m. |
| LOL *NM* | CaneCutter | 8/9/11 8:17 p.m. |
| Re: Wow, this is really kickin' up! | JonnyOThan | 8/9/11 7:42 p.m. |
| Re: Wow, this is really kickin' up! | Leviathan | 8/9/11 8:11 p.m. |
| Re: Wow, this is really kickin' up! | bluerunner | 8/9/11 8:23 p.m. |
| Lol. *NM* | Leviathan | 8/9/11 8:27 p.m. |
| Re: A Fistful of Arrows (pages 48-51) | Bry | 8/9/11 7:17 p.m. |
| I just noticed... | RC Master | 8/9/11 7:21 p.m. |
| Re: I just noticed... | Flynn J Taggart | 8/9/11 7:23 p.m. |
| Re: I just noticed... | Leviathan | 8/9/11 7:26 p.m. |
| ODSTs!?! :D | NsU Soldier | 8/9/11 8:33 p.m. |
| Re: A Fistful of Arrows (pages 48-51) | Stephen L. (SoundEffect) | 8/9/11 8:51 p.m. |
| Re: A Fistful of Arrows (pages 48-51) | Leviathan | 8/10/11 12:07 a.m. |
| Re: A Fistful of Arrows (pages 48-51) | Stephen L. (SoundEffect) | 8/10/11 6:04 a.m. |
| Soo... | GrimBrother IV | 8/9/11 8:59 p.m. |
| Halsey's close-up is beautiful! *NM* | ZackDark | 8/9/11 9:16 p.m. |
| Request | Beckx | 8/9/11 9:41 p.m. |
| Demise of the UNSC Forlorn Bell | Leviathan | 8/10/11 12:16 a.m. |
| Re: Demise of the UNSC Forlorn Bell | Stephen L. (SoundEffect) | 8/10/11 6:21 a.m. |
| Re: Demise of the UNSC Forlorn Bell | Leviathan | 8/10/11 6:35 a.m. |
| Re: Demise of the UNSC Forlorn Bell *NM* | Leviathan | 8/10/11 6:37 a.m. |
| Re: Demise of the UNSC Forlorn Bell | Beckx | 8/10/11 10:03 a.m. |
| Re: A Fistful of Arrows (pages 48-51) | Dagoonite | 8/9/11 9:43 p.m. |
| Re: A Fistful of Arrows (pages 48-51) | HotIcePhoenix | 8/9/11 11:29 p.m. |
| Thanks for the comments everyone! | Leviathan | 8/10/11 12:23 a.m. |
| Re: A Fistful of Arrows (pages 48-51) | jarsp | 8/10/11 9:59 a.m. |
| Re: A Fistful of Arrows (pages 48-51) | Kermit | 8/10/11 10:30 a.m. |
| Re: A Fistful of Arrows (pages 48-51) | General Vagueness | 8/10/11 12:57 p.m. |
| Amazing, better & better each submission. *NM* | Jayshum | 8/11/11 7:49 a.m. |
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