Aaand with that I've run out of synonyms for "awesome" so I'll just point out what I liked: Kalmiya was done perfectly. I was scared you might run with either a more cartoonish-looking character or fall for the "hot blue chick" thing, but you found a perfect way to visualize her.
Loooove the Superintendent. It actually made me sad to see it mourning the death of its' city. Unlike the one we all know and love, there is nothing this poor guy can do to help.
As always, I look forward to seeing more! I'm very interested in seeing how you explain Jun's absence from Castle in First Strike, even though we know he survives. I have a few theories myself, we'll see if we are on the same page. ;)
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