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| Re: A Fistful of Arrows Adjunct: Eliza Ingrid bio | |
| Posted By: Flynn J Taggart | Date: 9/4/11 5:54 p.m. |
In Response To: A Fistful of Arrows Adjunct: Eliza Ingrid bio (Leviathan) : A new article has been added to the adjunct section of : Leviathan.Bungie.Org, this one delving into the life of the : Insurrectionist, Eliza Ingrid. There's plenty of new things to be learned : about the main storyline from this, including names of locations that : never happened to be mentioned in the course of the comic, and plenty of : other interesting nuggets of info. : Click on the image to go directly to the article. : Great stuff, funny side note about Governor Jacob Jiles. I love the attention to detail. Only critique I'd have is the semi-casual use of language in the bio, for example "involvement of Spartans definitely warranted." In most of the Bungie supplementary material that isn't jokey, they tend to make an effort to be in character with their use of voice and language, for example an ONI officer would use language a professional spook would use, or an AI or an alien would use translated-to-english language that those creatures would use. Just off the top of my head an alternative sentence if one were to assume the info is coming from an ONI operative would be "authorization of Group Three assets justified given the sensitive nature of the leak." Maybe you didn't intende to have your adjunct series be in character like Bungie's supplementary material, in which case that's 100% OK! Your work continues to be fantastic, thanks Levi.
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