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Re: COMMAND Machinima, Reboot Possible, Need Feedb | |
Posted By: TDSpiral <brennagar@aol.com> | Date: 5/13/10 10:28 p.m. |
In Response To: COMMAND Machinima, Reboot Possible, Need Feedback! (AsiansOnFire) The voice acting is actually decent (it isn't annoying like a lot of other machinima I've seen, and you seemingly didn't put a stupid filter over the voices). However, and I realize you don't have to be grade A actors here, but the characters are lacking in appropriateness, emotionality, and wholeness. The Lieutenant Zu (sp?) in Part 1 didn't seem the least bit freaked out that Regret just jumped from the last human stronghold and left New Mombasa to rot. You don't have to oversell it, but he could look a little bit busier (running around, trying to find out what went wrong). In the episode, he's just standing there relaying information like a robot. In fact, a lot of them just kind of stand around when they should be on the move. Also, there are some awkward pauses between dialogue that just make it... awkward.
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COMMAND Machinima, Reboot Possible, Need Feedback! | AsiansOnFire | 5/13/10 8:39 p.m. |
Re: COMMAND Machinima, Reboot Possible, Need Feedb | padraig08 | 5/13/10 9:29 p.m. |
Re: COMMAND Machinima, Reboot Possible, Need Feedb | Aglor | 5/13/10 10:15 p.m. |
Re: COMMAND Machinima, Reboot Possible, Need Feedb | TDSpiral | 5/13/10 10:28 p.m. |
Re: COMMAND Machinima, Reboot Possible, Need Feedb | AsiansOnFire | 5/13/10 10:42 p.m. |
Re: COMMAND Machinima, Reboot Possible, Need Feedb | TDSpiral | 5/13/10 10:57 p.m. |
Re: COMMAND Machinima, Reboot Possible, Need Feedb | AsiansOnFire | 5/13/10 11:23 p.m. |
Re: COMMAND Machinima, Reboot Possible, Need Feedb | TDSpiral | 5/13/10 11:34 p.m. |
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