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Re: Noble Team portrait
Posted By: Harmanimus	Date: 3/4/10 10:38 p.m.
In Response To: Noble Team portrait (Justinian) It looks like Jorge is a little, I dunno. Off-placed. His positioning doesn't really evoke that he's bigger than Carter, and it makes seem a little unimportant, with Carter standing in front of him. Maybe raise his posture up, so you can see his helmet more and obscure him less. Or scoot him back from Carter some, which would give a better sense of him supporting Carter. Other than that, it looks like Emile's arm is over Kat. They're both facing away, right? It'll read a little better if she's not obscured. Maybe widen then whole composition and move Emile to the right and Jorge to the left, It looks like it's coming along nicely though. The rendering style is nice. Though the stark white highlights are a little iffy at the moment. I definitely look forward to seeing it finished.

Message Index

Noble Team portrait	Justinian	3/4/10 9:11 p.m.
Re: Noble Team portrait	Gtag=Reluctant Chaos	3/4/10 9:14 p.m.
Re: Noble Team portrait	0postmortem0	3/4/10 9:25 p.m.
Re: Noble Team portrait	Harmanimus	3/4/10 10:38 p.m.
Re: Noble Team portrait	Leviathan	3/4/10 11:00 p.m.
Re: Noble Team portrait	Justinian	3/4/10 11:05 p.m.
Re: Noble Team portrait	Harmanimus	3/4/10 11:31 p.m.