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Re: Hmmm
Posted By: SiliconDream =PN= <querl@uclink4.berkeley.edu>	Date: 6/5/00 3:28 p.m.
In Response To: Hmmm (Syphon) > Very nice, the only thing is, and I am not as good a writer as > you!!!! :) But, as a fan ;) try not to use the repetition thing, > "the marine looked to the sky", for when used a second > time, it cuts down on the powerfulness of the first time u used > it. Like this: > "The marine felt warm tears slide down his face... ... ... > .... .. .... ... Sam the general felt warm tears trickle down > his hot face" Using it AGAIN wears on the first time you > used it. Just a tip ;) I think he's using the repetition intentionally. It's a biblical thing. ;-) --SiliconDream

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"You all will die" (FF)	Tycho [OSC]	6/5/00 3:10 a.m.
Re: "You all will die" (FF)	HiddenTalon	6/5/00 8:15 a.m.
Re: "You all will die" (FF)	Tycho [OSC]	6/5/00 12:22 p.m.
Hmmm	Syphon	6/5/00 3:25 p.m.
Re: Hmmm	SiliconDream =PN=	6/5/00 3:28 p.m.
Re: Hmmm	Tycho [OSC]	6/5/00 4:39 p.m.
Re: Hmmm	Daft Shadow =PN=	6/5/00 6:00 p.m.
Re: Hmmm	ApolokiA	6/5/00 7:49 p.m.
Pretty cool(NT)	Xero	6/5/00 11:14 a.m.