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Posted By: Scifiteki | Date: 5/28/03 1:32 a.m. | |
In Response To: Re: MaraFF updated w/ two new stories One Illustra (Vaxuum BOB) : Actually, interlinking pfhor and human actions is still an idea. This story
Ah, forgive me... my perspective while reading of your story may have been skewed by the fact that I remember you mentioning perviously your desire to have that human-pfhor interlinking in your story... Probably would have picked it up anyway, but there you go. : I guess I do ;-)
Yes, you're spot on there. So, you could be conscious of something, but not consience of it. Conciousness refers to thought and awareness, concience refers to morality, values, and, to a certain extent, guilt. (Something to ponder about, should you continue this.) : Well, the recurring theme might just be: who dictates one's conscience. Of
Actually, near the start, you mentioned that some action had been 'carved into his concience', while he performed the action 'mechanically'. This seems to indicate to me that he does it so much that he no longer thinks about it, it has receded to an unconcious level of thought. So what I think you're trying to get across here is it's carved into his 'conciousness'. If we were referring to some sort of moral question/dilemma, then 'concience' would be entirely appropriate, but from my point of view you're not, you're just referring to an action requiring thought. And then that just made me suspicious of your use of the word 'concience' thereafter. I'm like that, you see. :D
Heh. I fully value the concept of mystery and hidden meaning in writing... If you've read my stories, you'll know that. :D : That fan fict is a university assignment, English Class. :D University! Woah. Now, I felt iffy about FFing, even in a roundabout verymuchchanged way for *Year 8*. Eh. I'm like that, my concience gets away with me sometimes. : ) Service With A Smile: ),
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MaraFF updated w/ two new stories One Illustrated! | Ernie | 5/25/03 1:10 p.m. | |
Love the Matrix-Marathon logo. :-) *NM* | ukimalefu | 5/25/03 3:51 p.m. | |
Re: MaraFF updated w/ two new stories One Illustra | Scifiteki | 5/25/03 9:49 p.m. | |
Re: MaraFF updated w/ two new stories One Illustra | Vaxuum BOB | 5/27/03 4:16 a.m. | |
Re: MaraFF updated w/ two new stories One Illustra | Scifiteki | 5/28/03 1:32 a.m. | |
Re: MaraFF updated w/ two new stories One Illustra | Vaxuum BOB | 6/3/03 1:03 a.m. | |
Re: MaraFF updated w/ two new stories One Illustra | D-M.A. | 6/2/03 10:07 p.m. |
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