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	Message: : Cool. Some of my thoughts: * Having largely left Marathon behind for the time : being, don't count me as interested; sorry. : * I hope you ditch the fanfic-style opening. I don't like pseudo-canon being : mixed in with ostensible presentations of canon. (See also: the PID-style : prologue and various other extras in M1A1.) Instead, I'd just briefly : explain the source of the content and how it was originally presented in : the games, and add whatever connecting information you think is needed : between terminals later on. : * I'm not sure I understand the reasoning behind removing the : incomplete-mission messages. (I'd lean toward including everything : regardless; just with qualifying notes where necessary.) : * Do you also plan to make a color PDF version? (I don't know what other : major color ebook formats exist.) : * It'll be basically impossible to read (possibly even to see) the terminal : pict text in greyscale; but I guess it's probably not worth presenting : separately. : * I'd put page breaks at the end of each terminal. : * I assume you plan to eventually add the manual texts and chapter screens. : * The timeline belongs as an appendix at the end, not at the beginning where : it spoils later developments. : * The Nar Chronicles and Pfhor Mating Ritual(s) also seem like potential : appendix material. (You could try to collect story-relevant crew remarks : for an additional appendix or appendices; but that seems like a lot of : extra work.) : * I assume you plan to include the Lost Network Packets at the end of M1. : * Ebooks of Pathways into Darkness, Myth, Oni and Halo would also (possibly) : be cool to have; though admittedly the later ones would have to include : increasing amounts of transcribed dialogue.
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