Re: Fic: Before Crisis
Posted By: VikingBoyBillyDate: 12/4/15 10:08 a.m.

In Response To: Fic: Before Crisis *LINK* (General-RADIX)

I think it's interesting that labtops will still be around in 2794, and I thought all the AIs had the standard green marathon avatar before the pfhor got Tycho.

There was some thesaurus abuse in this. I had to go to wiktionary at least three times for words I wouldn't think are in the SO's vocabulary.

If it's an eleven light-year wait, how come Leela's light speed warning takes 90+ years to reach earth? Lol.

I thought that conversation with Tycho was foreshadowing that Durandal found a way to use the ship's sensors and discovered the pfhor, but the ending is when he first discovers them?

Good work, though.

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