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Posted By: VikingBoyBilly | Date: 12/4/15 10:08 a.m. | |
In Response To: Fic: Before Crisis *LINK* (General-RADIX) I think it's interesting that labtops will still be around in 2794, and I thought all the AIs had the standard green marathon avatar before the pfhor got Tycho. There was some thesaurus abuse in this. I had to go to wiktionary at least three times for words I wouldn't think are in the SO's vocabulary. If it's an eleven light-year wait, how come Leela's light speed warning takes 90+ years to reach earth? Lol. I thought that conversation with Tycho was foreshadowing that Durandal found a way to use the ship's sensors and discovered the pfhor, but the ending is when he first discovers them? Good work, though.
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Fic: Before Crisis *LINK* | General-RADIX | 12/4/15 5:16 a.m. | |
Re: Fic: Before Crisis | Bob-B-Q | 12/4/15 8:44 a.m. | |
Re: Fic: Before Crisis | VikingBoyBilly | 12/4/15 10:08 a.m. | |
Re: Fic: Before Crisis | General-RADIX | 12/4/15 12:21 p.m. |
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