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Posted By: grantix | Date: 3/9/11 9:35 p.m. |
In Response To: Re: Isolated incident? (DEEP NNN) This isn't official, and I can tell you that pretty easily. Not that grammar would make or break this thing, solely, but there are a few grammatical errors throughout this thing. Many uses of "That" instead of "Which". "I recently came across your request for information on Orion F484. How you even came across his name is beyond me, let alone what few salient facts you seem to possess. Considering the classified nature of the events surrounding everything that transpired, it's no surprise that your request was shot dead. I'm going to give you a gentle word of advice – keep up your requests, and you'll be the same way." Should be a "which". I just would expect better grammar from 343i, what with Frankie and a few other writers working over there. Secondly, as someone who is currently enlisted in the military, and, as a matter of fact is actually in EOD school, I can point out some flaws which 343i would have the money to investigate. PFC: Army rank.
If they're supposed to be Marines, which I would expect, considering this is Halo... that PFC rank should not be there, at all.
All in all... I'd say this was an excited fan, trying to push out an interesting fanfic. But definitely not official.
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Captain, not everybody is blowing you off... | ISitInA | 3/9/11 3:12 p.m. |
E21A9.6411A.7 | ISitInA | 3/9/11 3:13 p.m. |
...wat? *NM* | Hyokin | 3/9/11 3:54 p.m. |
What he said. *NM* | UnrealCh13f | 3/9/11 4:05 p.m. |
Re: What he said. | Gilver | 3/9/11 4:09 p.m. |
Re: What he said. | Louis Wu | 3/9/11 4:11 p.m. |
Consider my interest piqued | SonGoharotto | 3/9/11 4:32 p.m. |
Re: Agreed 7.5 million percent *NM* | Hedgemony | 3/9/11 5:12 p.m. |
Agreellionaire! *NM* | Beckx | 3/9/11 5:18 p.m. |
It's replies that this that need a like button *NM* | onebitrocket | 3/10/11 7:11 a.m. |
Hmm... | Quirel | 3/10/11 11:53 a.m. |
Agreemanjaro! *NM* | SonGoharotto | 3/10/11 7:37 p.m. |
Re: What he said. | Gilver | 3/9/11 5:40 p.m. |
My apologies | Hive | 3/9/11 4:16 p.m. |
Re: My apologies | ErrantVagrant | 3/9/11 6:27 p.m. |
I live to serve! | Hive | 3/9/11 6:42 p.m. |
That was nice. | ZackDark | 3/9/11 6:59 p.m. |
Re: That was nice. | Hive | 3/9/11 7:17 p.m. |
Re: That was nice. | DEEP NNN | 3/9/11 7:42 p.m. |
UNSC Theseus | Hive | 3/9/11 7:50 p.m. |
About the Covenant | ZackDark | 3/9/11 9:28 p.m. |
Re: Status Inquiry | RD Carnage | 3/9/11 7:43 p.m. |
Re: Anomolies Inquiry | Hive | 3/9/11 7:57 p.m. |
Re: Anomolies Inquiry | GrimBrother One | 3/9/11 8:00 p.m. |
Re: Anomolies Inquiry | Hive | 3/9/11 8:10 p.m. |
Re: Anomolies Inquiry | GrimBrother One | 3/9/11 8:13 p.m. |
Committee of Minds for Security | Hive | 3/9/11 8:18 p.m. |
I find it interesting... | GrimBrother One | 3/9/11 7:58 p.m. |
Re: I find it interesting... | DEEP NNN | 3/9/11 8:13 p.m. |
Re: I find it interesting... | GrimBrother One | 3/9/11 8:16 p.m. |
Man... | CyberKN | 3/9/11 7:58 p.m. |
Re: Bees... | Hive | 3/9/11 8:00 p.m. |
Try this, Hive: | Hyokin | 3/9/11 8:11 p.m. |
Re: Bees... | NartFOpc | 3/9/11 8:13 p.m. |
Re: Bees... | Hive | 3/9/11 8:20 p.m. |
Re: That was nice. | Apollo Quinn | 3/14/11 2:05 p.m. |
Re: That was nice. | The Loot | 3/14/11 6:21 p.m. |
ALERT! | Hive | 3/10/11 12:21 a.m. |
Re: ALERT! | NsU Soldier | 3/10/11 12:22 a.m. |
Status | sqorck | 3/10/11 12:28 a.m. |
Re: Status | jo | 3/10/11 1:01 a.m. |
Re: My apologies | ThePhoenixAeon | 3/9/11 8:03 p.m. |
Re: My apologies | arbitersaids | 3/9/11 8:12 p.m. |
Re: Covenant | Hive | 3/9/11 8:15 p.m. |
Re: Covenant | DEEP NNN | 3/9/11 8:51 p.m. |
Re: Covenant | Hive | 3/9/11 8:56 p.m. |
Re: Covenant | Arithmomaniac | 3/9/11 9:15 p.m. |
An unofficial advisory warning | Hive | 3/9/11 9:34 p.m. |
Re: An unofficial advisory warning | Dielectric | 3/9/11 10:26 p.m. |
Re: An unofficial advisory warning | ISitInA | 3/9/11 10:55 p.m. |
Re: An unofficial advisory warning | Twitch | 3/10/11 12:16 a.m. |
Re: An unofficial advisory warning | ZackDark | 3/10/11 12:40 a.m. |
Re: An unofficial advisory warning | JPJ007 | 3/10/11 1:05 a.m. |
Re: An unofficial advisory warning | ThePhoenixAeon | 3/10/11 7:52 p.m. |
Re: An unofficial advisory warning | Time Glitch | 3/10/11 11:55 p.m. |
Only 43rd annual celebration? | ruwe_44 | 3/10/11 11:28 a.m. |
Re: Covenant | SonGoharotto | 3/10/11 7:52 p.m. |
Re: My apologies | thereIwasn't | 3/9/11 9:22 p.m. |
Re: E21A9.6411A.7 | Schooly D | 3/9/11 4:17 p.m. |
Re: E21A9.6411A.7 | caleb ex nihilo | 3/9/11 5:24 p.m. |
Re: E21A9.6411A.7 | Firemist | 3/9/11 5:54 p.m. |
Re: E21A9.6411A.7 | Hyokin | 3/9/11 7:09 p.m. |
DEFIANT ? | DEEP NNN | 3/9/11 5:46 p.m. |
Re: DEFIANT ? | DEEP NNN | 3/9/11 6:25 p.m. |
Re: E21A9.6411A.7 | Stephen L. (SoundEffect) | 3/9/11 6:10 p.m. |
I'm not going to lie... | padraig08 | 3/9/11 6:41 p.m. |
Good dialogue, if nothing else. *NM* | Duncan | 3/9/11 4:31 p.m. |
Notice the date 2612 ~60 years after the war... *NM* | ruwe_44 | 3/9/11 5:37 p.m. |
Re: Captain, not everybody is blowing you off... | ChrisTheeCrappy | 3/9/11 6:12 p.m. |
Hmm, Lets see where this goes. *NM* | ElzarTheBam | 3/9/11 6:16 p.m. |
Isolated incident? | thereIwasn't | 3/9/11 8:33 p.m. |
Re: Isolated incident? | arbitersaids | 3/9/11 8:38 p.m. |
Re: Isolated incident? | thereIwasn't | 3/9/11 8:49 p.m. |
Re: Isolated incident? | DEEP NNN | 3/9/11 8:53 p.m. |
Re: Isolated incident? | thereIwasn't | 3/9/11 8:59 p.m. |
Re: Isolated incident? | DEEP NNN | 3/9/11 9:02 p.m. |
Some Insight | grantix | 3/9/11 9:35 p.m. |
Re: Some Insight | thereIwasn't | 3/9/11 9:39 p.m. |
Re: Some Insight | DEEP NNN | 3/9/11 9:53 p.m. |
Re: Some Insight | Harmanimus | 3/10/11 1:00 a.m. |
Re: Isolated incident? | Decommissioner | 3/9/11 8:39 p.m. |
Re: Isolated incident? | DEEP NNN | 3/9/11 8:45 p.m. |
Re: Isolated incident? | thereIwasn't | 3/9/11 9:08 p.m. |
Re: Isolated incident? | Raigns | 3/9/11 10:56 p.m. |
I'll try.. *NM* | sqorck | 3/10/11 1:04 a.m. |
I got one back! | sqorck | 3/10/11 1:28 a.m. |
I just sent "Hello, Hive is this you?" *NM* | sqorck | 3/10/11 1:33 a.m. |
Another | sqorck | 3/10/11 1:43 a.m. |
Re: Another | Raigns | 3/10/11 2:32 p.m. |
Acronym? What? Don't think so... | Duncan | 3/10/11 7:52 a.m. |
Re: Acronym? What? Don't think so... | thereIwasn't | 3/10/11 9:35 a.m. |
Re: Captain, not everybody is blowing you off... | LoneRanger 2.5 | 3/9/11 8:40 p.m. |
Re: Captain, not everybody is blowing you off... | FyreWulff | 3/10/11 2:53 a.m. |
Re: Captain, not everybody is blowing you off... | ThePhoenixAeon | 3/10/11 11:12 a.m. |
Sent Chair a direct email | Carver | 3/10/11 5:51 p.m. |
Re: Sent Chair a direct email | Carver | 3/10/11 6:12 p.m. |
Re: Captain, not everybody is blowing you off... | sclamons | 3/12/11 11:36 a.m. |
Re: Captain, not everybody is blowing you off... | sclamons | 3/12/11 10:46 p.m. |
Re: Captain, not everybody is blowing you off... | Guywired | 3/16/11 9:41 a.m. |
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