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Re: Final Moments by Digital Ph33r | |
Posted By: urk | Date: 9/6/08 2:30 p.m. |
In Response To: Final Moments by Digital Ph33r (Spartan Jag) Atmosphere, camera work, editing, and post effects are all top notch. Unparalleled, really. I'd like to see some varied voice acting. I get that resources are limited, but every voice has a commonality that breaks the fiction for me. I'd also like to see a narrative with more focus on a strong arc. This particular sequence is an extension of a scene taken from Halo and it ultimately serves the same purpose for me - it's a scene out of a larger story. I didn't feel attached to any of the characters and had I watched this with no Halo foreknowledge, I wouldn't have had a clue as to what was going on with the soldiers and would have felt like a good bit of the narrative was missing. There were a lot of great little personal touches at the outset. The banter withing the squad was good. I just feel like there should have been a more defined thread to tie it all up. : There's a new machinima up by Digital Ph33r. : "Based on the story of the UNSC marines' first encounter with the Flood
: I really liked it. Some great camera angles, nice story, and good suspense. : Check it out on Youtube . : - Jag
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Final Moments by Digital Ph33r | Spartan Jag | 9/6/08 1:21 p.m. |
very awesome *NM* | Miguel Chavez | 9/6/08 2:27 p.m. |
Re: Final Moments by Digital Ph33r | grantix | 9/6/08 2:29 p.m. |
Re: Final Moments by Digital Ph33r | urk | 9/6/08 2:30 p.m. |
You know... | BlueNinja | 9/6/08 2:43 p.m. |
Re: Final Moments by Digital Ph33r | My7hos | 9/6/08 3:07 p.m. |
Did Digital Ph33r do all of the voices? *NM* | Koholint | 9/6/08 7:12 p.m. |
Besides Arby, Chief, and Cortana, when doesn't he? *NM* | Devil Mingy | 9/6/08 7:42 p.m. |
Re: Final Moments by Digital Ph33r | Aglor | 9/6/08 10:16 p.m. |
Disappointed. | Psychophan7 | 9/7/08 4:43 p.m. |
orly? | Spartan Jag | 9/9/08 10:29 a.m. |
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