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	Message: : Hey I need feedback on some of these stories I'm typing up. They're going to : be used as RPGs (one isn't). : 1)PROLOGUE : It had been months since the event of the Flintlock had happened. Walking : outside he stares into the empty midnight sky expecting to see something. : Dissapointed for seeing nothing he sits down on the wooden chair. You are : the infamous Dave. Hero in the nightmare pyramind and the hero from the : past that helped during the battle with the U.E.S.C. Flintlock and the : mysterious colony. When in the future you were told that you were a : Guardian Knight, a protector of things that are good. A Chaos Knight was : apart of the battle. You were summoned by a Guardian to stop it. The : Guardians said that you would be summoned again soon, but when? Getting : off the wooden chair Dave starts to walk a bit. Looking into the sky Dave : finds what he had been waiting for. A flash had appeared in the sky. A : sudden beam like a hologram appeared on the ground. "The time has : come for thy knight to return to the realm that is the future. In order to : prevent a bad future you must enter from here knight. Much time has passed : in the future. You will enter the year 2811. Durandal has arrived at : Lh'own. Go knight. We shall update you once the time comes." The : hologram dissapears in a flash. Before the light settles another beam : strikes the ground. Dave enters this beam. It's a futuric time machine but : much more. It's only a few minutes before he reaches the year 2811. : Looking around for where he is Dave remembers that he isn't armed. [I]Well : thats always good. I don't have a gun.[/I] Before Dave can complain : anymore an engry pack and a pistol with ammo appears. [I]Never mind.[/I] : Picking the pistol and the ammo up he keeps the pack just in case he runs : into a tight spot. Walking down the hallway Dave spots some Pfhor. Taking : his pistol he fires at the group of shocked Pfhor. [I]Bet they won't : expect a human with a pistol![/I] Killing the group a spot in the wall : opens up and a drone that looks a bit like a MADD from the Flintlock : appears. It fires at Dave. [I]Looks like they got some better stuff.[/I] : Empting the last of his pistol clip into the drone it falls to the floor. : Reloading a door opens behind it a blue fighter. Aiming at its head he : pulls the trigger. The wimpy fighter falls to the floor. Exiting the area : Dave tries to destroy a lot of stuff. Seeing a trooper he grabs the dead : Pfhor fighter's staff and throws it like a javilin at the trooper. It : strikes the alien in the head. Taking the rifle a group of five fighters : show up. Putting the rifle to good use he fires a grenade at their feet : then mows them down with bullets. None survive in the path of Dave. Alarms : ring all about the spaceship. Finding a window he looks out it seeing : Lh'own. Before he realises it Dave teleports off the Pfhor spacecraft. : Reappearing to a different place it looks strangly familar like the Pfhor : warship he went to during the year 2794. A chuckling laughter is heard : somewhere close by. Finding what looks like a computer terminal Dave : suddenly remembers that laughter. "Well I didn't expect to find you : there. This IS a surprise! Welcome to the Boomer." "Hello : Durandal." "This is Lh'own, the S'pht homeworld. I've already : sent one of my best down to the planet. Saddly you will not be meeting : him. Now we can't let him know what happened during the traveling can we? : Since your here I'll be putting you to good use. I'll send you to the : armory area to get into better gear cause your going planetside. Oh and : you have no choice, unless you would like to meet some old friends cause : I've heard they REALLY want to meet you." Seeing that Dave has no : choice he heads to the armory. Putting on some "better gear" he : leaves with his pistol and three clips. Revisting a terminal Durandal pops : up. "Well don't you look fancy! Time to meet those friends but with : weapons. Your mission is to wipe out a certain sector. They got cannons : that need to be taken out. You will get some backup. I rather not have all : my humans dead yet. Go do what your good at." Being teleported Dave : reappears planetside. Ten other humans beam in at your position. A Pfhor : fighter spots you and your squad and warns the rest of the other Pfhor : nearby. Running toward cover Dave feels that this is all like an old : dream...... : 2)CHAPTER I : VOLUNTEERS : Finally after the long travel through space we finally reached Lh'own, the : S'pht homeworld. Durandal started to awake colonist from their stasis : chambers asking for volunteers. "Assist us and control your destiny, : refuse and face indefinite return to the unreliable Pfhor stasis : chambers." Few refused his offer. Men head to the armory being given : pistols and ammuntion. Some were given other weapons. They were also given : eye implants for some reason. They marched off to wherever Durandal wanted : without a choice. Many died through the years searching for the mythical : eleventh clan, the S'pht Kr. Not many believed that there was an eleventh : clan but we had no choice but to follow orders. Though through the many : deaths some survived through all the battles against the Pfhor. Robert : Blake, the human leader, helped us through it and there was also the : security officer from Tau Ceti. : This is our story. The history of the fighting on Lh'own. : 3)One of the darkest hours in history for both the Terrans and Pfhor. Nobody : expected something like that to EVER happen. A new faction rose that day. : Nothing remained of the neutrel colony but destrution and the infected : monsterious beings. Though some lived to tell the story and help stop the : threat in their tracks for the time being. Through the time period of the : events over four million deaths were recorded. That wasn't counting the : infected deaths. If those people, those heros weren't there that day the : threat could have possibly reached both the Terran's and Pfhor's : homeworlds destroying their races. : This is the story of the heros that survived through it all.... : tHiS Is tHe StOrY oF ArE lOsS aGaInSt ThOsE pItIfUl hErOs.... : >PART OF STORY
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