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	Message: : Starting tomorrow when I finally return to my glorious Macintosh, I will : finally get off my lazy ass and finish the project. It will be in the : neighborhood of 12 levels long (the demo had 6 real ones). : Why am I posting this? I wanted to get some feedback on the demo that's kind : of important. Since I'm going to revise the demo to help reverse some of : the complaints that I received, I want to get some additional suggestions : on what I should fix. For the record, this is what's going to change: - : There will be terminal picts! Not good ones, since my poor comp can't hope : to handle anything beyond Appleworks, but there will be fresh picts : anyway. [Hey! If you can make kickass picts, apply within for fame and : fortune*. Otherwise you get not-so-kickass picts.] : - There will be a major plot revision. I originally planned for Dark Star to : be 24 levels long and have a few chapters in the middle that took care of : some sub-plots mentioned in the terms in the demo. Since there's only 12 : levels now, there's no room for that, and so the extra fluff will be : snipped. : - More ammo in almost every level. I noticed that playing through, I had so : little ammo if I ignored all the secrets, and I can't imagine how much : hell TC must be with basically no ammo. : Level-by-level revisions: ISOLATION: - Ditched. It'll be replaced with a much : more impressive introduction level. : LONE WAY OF THE SAMURAI: - Remove a Fighter from a spot it can't fit in : (whoops) : CANNON FODDER: - Additional pattern buffer placed near the 1x recharger : across the dam. : - Slightly slower lava flood in the final escape. : - Replace the Flick'ta in the escape route with Fighters (I had a Shotgun and : an SMG that I used when testing this level due to a couple secrets, and : inadvertently used them. Yeah, that wasn't smart.) : TRUTH AND RECONCILIATION: - Possibly rename the level : - Remove some of the monsters : - Ammo will have a limited regeneration, and there will be more Shotgun ammo : - Fix some of the annotations : - Change the sky texture to space. There is no way that a massive Pfhor : dreadnaught could possibly enter any planet's atmosphere if it planned on : leaving again, so I'll fix that plothole. : ALLIES AND ENEMIES: - Remove a Defender from a spot it can't fit in : - Replace a large quantity of AR ammo with fusion ammo : - Remove many Flick'ta from the underwater corridors near the AI node : A RAT IS A RAT: Ooooooh boy... : - Make the running part MUCH easier. I might remove the timers from that : altogether, because it makes the level much too hurried to enjoy it, in my : opinion (I got frustrated, and I made the stupid map). : - Make the secret keycard a bit easier to get (No secret finder would ever : catch this secret without Forge... I think). : MINING GAMES: - Fix the terminals, obviously. : - Change the color of the VacBobs. : Post any additional revisions (either level-specific or overall) that you : have, please, cause I really don't want this to suck. : * Fortune not guaranteed.
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