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Re: well im still working on the map
Posted By: ukimalefuDate: 1/21/05 6:08 p.m.

In Response To: Re: well im still working on the map (Jacke)

: A hint: when telling your story, make sure to spell "Pfhor"
: correctly. It might not seem like a big deal, but spelling errors is
: killer for suspension of disbelief (at least for me).

And the writing seems a little... I don't know... rushed?

This! that! boom! bam! go!

Maybe it's just me.

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well im still working on the mapRoguexcx 1/21/05 1:33 p.m.
     Re: well im still working on the mapJacke 1/21/05 1:50 p.m.
           Re: well im still working on the mapukimalefu 1/21/05 6:08 p.m.
                 Re: well im still working on the mapRoguexcx 1/26/05 9:58 a.m.

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