: I've considered modifying the infravision powerup to tint everything grey
: instead of blue, and giving you that on the dream levels. (Or possibly
: modifying the level MML to just stick it on you without the need for
: powerups).
: And I kinda think Yoss's terminal deserves some dissection, but I'm certainly
: not the one to do it... In fact I think all these things need more story
: dissection to them. But that's probably just me being selfish and wanting
: to hear what you think of my story.
I liked the feel of this level better with the fish eye, and the black and white thing sounds cool.
About the terminal, it gives me goosebumps everytime I read it, but it seems a little too obvious that it's durandal (unless it's not, then I am an ass indeed)
but I greatly like the line about you not remebering him.
: -Fobo is depressed again this week, nevermind him...
For what it's worth, let me tell you what happened after I finished chapter five: I sat stairing into my computer screen, with this weird tingling feeling all thourgh me, and in the middle of it all, the thought and feeling of "wow". Magical.
Hats off and heads bowed.