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| Re: Quality control went for a toilet break... | |
| Posted By: Hedgemony <hedgemony@live.com> | Date: 1/20/11 7:49 a.m. |
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: I love the visuals - everything just "pops" and looks so vivid, : which really makes this a joy to read over; however one thing really : jarred me out of the story was on pg. 43, panel 2 when you use : "you're" (as in you are) instead of your (possessive). Sorry - : I'm a nit-picker for grammar sometimes, and this just really caught me off : guard. Other than that one word, I really enjoyed reading through and : looking at the visuals. : Can't wait for the finale! I'm Australian, so English is my second language:) I'll fix it for the directors cut and then I'll add it to my list of things I need to improve upon. #364: Learn English goodly. -hegde.
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