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Re: Halo: Special Projects Division Pgs 56-59
Posted By: JDQuackers <jameslmatthewsiii+HBO@gmail.com>	Date: 1/20/11 7:27 a.m.
I love the visuals - everything just "pops" and looks so vivid, which really makes this a joy to read over; however one thing really jarred me out of the story was on pg. 43, panel 2 when you use "you're" (as in you are) instead of your (possessive). Sorry - I'm a nit-picker for grammar sometimes, and this just really caught me off guard. Other than that one word, I really enjoyed reading through and looking at the visuals. Can't wait for the finale!

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