Re: epilogue terminal needing editing [final post]


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Re: epilogue terminal needing editing [final post]

Posted By: patrick Date: 12/24/07 7:40 a.m.
In Response To: Re: chapter 5 terminal needing editing (patrick)

One final edit.
The Near Side Of Everywhere, poly 867, quote-
-As the demons' wanton rage and inhibition fuels their own tortment, even as reality itself concedes to their every whim
With the playthrough finished I've no more QC here; further comments would lie in the realm of non-trivial review/critique.

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Re: Eternal X Final Candidate	Forrest of B.org	12/17/07 11:34 a.m.
Re: chapter 1 terminal needing editing	patrick	12/16/07 12:15 a.m.
Re: chapter 2 terminal needing editing	patrick	12/16/07 9:00 p.m.
Re: chapter 3 terminal needing editing	patrick	12/20/07 4:42 a.m.
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Re: epilogue terminal needing editing [final post]	patrick	12/24/07 7:40 a.m.
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Re: epilogue terminal needing editing [final post]	patrick	12/27/07 8:13 a.m.
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Re: Two instances of questionable behavior in ch4	patrick	12/23/07 3:39 a.m.



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