: The Airlock opens to reveal piles of dead grunts, brutes, and Jackals strewn
: all over the place. The MC looks around, stunned, for a moment, when in
: walks the Security Officer from a little Colony ship known as the U.E.S.C.
: Marathon, the barrel of the grenade launcher on his MA-75B Battle rifle
: still smoking. He casually walks into the airlock the Chief just came out
: of, but as they cross paths he says "That's how it's done,
: bitch."
Nice, but I'd add a few grunts running around that the SO is finishing off, fists only. I'd also replace the "casually walking into the airlock" bit with the SO gracefully frogblasting over the MC's head (maybe doing a flip or two), and without stopping, bashing out the airlock door with his fist, leaving the MC to suck vacuum. Actions speak louder than words. :)
I wouldn't have the SO say anything to the MC, but when the sound of rushing air has been been going for a few seconds (due to the missing airlock door), there would be a voice-out, saying; "no school like the old school" or something like that.
How would you have the "MC meets SO" scenario go?
(P.S. Hope no one mind my gravedigging...)
