: Story page mistake 101: Turning a theory into proof.
: In your opening paragraph you put forward a theory that the Jjaro are a
: "race of cyborgs". In your last line you make it a statement of
: fact ("the Jjaro are cyborgs"). You may be right but coming to
: that conclusion takes l little more evidence.
You are right in saying that this needs more evidence to fully prove, but the final phrase you pointed to ("the Jjaro are cyborgs") wasn't intended to give the impression that I am stating Jjaro cyborg-ness as a fact; I probably should've said something more like "If the Jjaro are cyborgs". Sorry for the inconvenience.