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	Re: MaraFF Updated!
	Posted By: D-M.A.	Date: 12/26/02 10:29 a.m.
	In Response To: MaraFF Updated! (Ernie) A great story! Easily Scifiteki's best story so far. I like the way he is able to manipulate the readers(at least my) feelings for the characters in his stories. He managed to get me to feel sad for both of the cyborgs as well as the wife at some point in the story. I think the ending was also suiting and quite clever. It would have been hard to get a proper resolution in the end without assuming too much. Keep up the good work (when you get back :))! Oh, the fight-scenarios were also groovie!

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Replies:

	MaraFF Updated!	Ernie	12/25/02 7:43 a.m.
	Re: MaraFF Updated!	Boomer	12/25/02 2:16 p.m.
	Re: MaraFF Updated!	Scifiteki	12/25/02 5:56 p.m.
	Re: MaraFF Updated!	Boomer	12/25/02 6:36 p.m.
	Re: MaraFF Updated!	D-M.A.	12/26/02 10:29 a.m.
	Re: MaraFF Updated!	Scifiteki@Airport	12/26/02 7:08 p.m.
	Re: MaraFF Updated!	Steve Levinson	12/27/02 5:34 a.m.
	Re: MaraFF Updated!	Yossarian	12/27/02 6:01 p.m.
	Disney eh...?	Ernie	12/29/02 7:55 a.m.
	Re: MaraFF Updated!	Scifiteki	1/15/03 6:54 a.m.

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