: short introduction with (unreadable) checkpoints (unreadable) showing bob
: (unreadable) concentrations
: (unreadable) that bobs appear on overhead map
Those first three "unreadable" words seem to be exactly what Greg wrote in their place (he's replacing crappy handwriting with... not as crappy handwriting). Nothing interesting of note, there. The fourth "unreadable" looks to me like "draf?stio?"... I can't make it out.
:Serious repr???d if too many civilians get killed
:Aliens [unreadable] suprised by voracity of
:the counter attack — take some offensive
:action ->
The first, almost impossible to read word is likely "reprehend". I can only guess that the unreadable word is "seem".
