Just read through it, and I'm quite impressed how well the pieces fit together :-)
Someone already started writing on chapter 2 though, so if anyone contributes anything to the story it should be after this contribution.
: The Marathon "Never Ending" story involving a CRIST mechanic as he
: nears Mars is now posted to the MaraFF:
: http://marathon.bungie.org/maraff/new.html
: It's far from done people. I'm tempted to write a section myself, but I'm
: wraped up with summer work and WMaiD, among other commitment a little too
: tightly.
: Make sure to email all submissions to maraff@bungie.org
: Regards,
: -Blayne
: Maraff Editor
: