: Why, this forum post: http://forums.bungie.org/story/?read=27774
: I wrote the first 2500 words in one night I was so taken by the idea of the
: Phfor Queen, though some of the paragraphs that made it into the piece
: were written over a year ago, especially those concerning the marine.
And lets not forget section 16 (I think it was)...
It's funny, the idea which eventually turned into Hathor's role in Eternal was contemplation on the Dark One from the Unformatted KYT Terminal. Originally I postulated that perhaps she was the Pfhor Queen (I could find the post on here if you like), but that seemed somehow wrong at the time. I was still considering it for a while as a possible sequel, which I doubt will ever happen now. Anyway... you've taken that idea and done very well with it. 'Twas quite a fun read.
On a related note, Ernie - sorry, Blayne - at one point was urging me to write a MaraFF of the Eternal plot, and I said I would be interested but I'd much rather have a ghost writer since while my plots and concepts may be good I suck at putting them in proper form. Think you might be interested Yoss?