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	Some typos and such
	Posted By: scratskinner	Date: 6/16/12 10:54 a.m.
	In Response To: WMaiD Short Story / Update *LINK* (Blayne) : Hi everyone, : Posted an update on the WMaiD scenario Bighouse site. : http://bighouse.bungie.org/wmaid/index_main.html : C/P'ed here for your convenience: ----------------------------------- : WMaiD lingers with a few levels left unfinished, and broken MML scripts for : Aleph One that tripped up development back in 2008. Textures and high : resolution weapon sprites are complete, but without MML that functions, : only the 'Classic' Mac OS 9 application version works. : I'd like to finish WMaiD one day - even if it's almost ten years today since : the project began back in 2002. : In the meantime, here's a piece of fiction from WMaiD I wrote and updated : recently. It reveals what happens in a 'failed' timeline - one that : divirges from the Marathon:Infinity > WMaiD > Rubicon stream, : becoming the one played in Marathon:Red. A few years back, I talked this : over with both Scott from the Rubicon team, and Ian McConville, creator of : M:Red, and recieved their permission to link the stories of each to WMaiD : in this way. :) : WMaiD: Future History Archive // The Battle of Rogue Star : http://marathon.bungie.org/maraff/archive/wmaid/futureshistory.html : Enjoy. : ----------------------------------- Can I point out some typos and awkward wording? Should "broad spanning" be "broad-spanning"? (2nd paragraph) "Once planet side" "Once planetside"(2nd paragraph pg2) "in academic circles weather" "in academic circles whether" "in the contested hot zones along side" "in the contested hot zones alongside" (4th paragraph pg2) "The battles" "The battle's" "Pfhor troops hierarchical" "The Pfhor troops' hierarchical" "would have serious" "would have seriously" (5th paragraph pg2) "the ships pilot" "the ship's pilot" (6th paragraph pg2) "ships origins" "ship's origins" "from the HUDs of planet side" "from the HUDs of planetside" "the Cyborgs presence" "the Cyborg's presence" "UESC Marathons surviving crew" "UESC Marathon's surviving crew" (7th paragraph pg2) "the troops activities" "the troops' activities" (8th paragraph pg2) "with the the Pfhor" "with the Pfhor" (9th paragraph pg2) "Yet, the" "Yet the" (10th paragraph pg2) "numerous outter rim" "numerous outer rim" (11th paragraph pg2) "used to prevent the plagues spread" "used to prevent the plague's spread" (12th paragraph pg2) "often cited example of humanities" "often cited example of humanity's" (16th paragraph pg2)

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	WMaiD Short Story / Update *LINK*	Blayne	6/15/12 9:35 p.m.
	Re: WMaiD Short Story / Update	baile045	6/15/12 10:19 p.m.
	Re: WMaiD Short Story / Update	Godot	6/15/12 10:30 p.m.
	Re: WMaiD Short Story / Update	Blayne	6/16/12 4:32 a.m.
	Re: WMaiD Short Story / Update	Godot	6/16/12 4:39 a.m.
	Some typos and such	scratskinner	6/16/12 10:54 a.m.
	Re: Some typos and such	Blayne	7/23/12 6:02 p.m.
	Re: Some typos and such	treellama	7/24/12 3:52 a.m.
	MaraFF page Updated: 2 New Stories *LINK*	Blayne	7/23/12 6:55 p.m.
	Re: MaraFF page Updated: 2 New Stories	Godot	7/23/12 11:47 p.m.

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