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Re: Dreaming of Empire
Posted By: chiasaur11Date: 6/14/10 10:09 p.m.

In Response To: Re: Dreaming of Empire *LINK* (chiasaur11)

And now, having read?

Not bad at all. Doesn't entirely seem to fit from where I'm standing though, unfortunately. Just the little things, Pfhor generally motivated by punishment in the logs, and Tfear seeming motivated by duty.

But then, Tfear's an odd duck, lets face it. A Pfhor motivated by a sense of duty, generally incredibly competent, and the one guy who ever scares Durandal?

He's gonna be an outlier in a ton of diagrams.

Really liked the bits about Pfhor religion and human self obsession, returning to the more prominent plus column. (And, on a lot more personal a note, I really like seeing Tycho squashed into a corner and begging for his life. Never seemed in Durandal's league in the games, and whenever he's portrayed as an equal, it kinda feels weird.)

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