Criticism wanted for a Marathon related work.


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Criticism wanted for a Marathon related work.

Posted By: chiasaur11 Date: 9/17/09 11:20 a.m.

Sorry to be making a request with my first post (after about a year of lurking) but you fellows seemed the best individuals to give advice on all things Marathon.
I did a Let's Play of Marathon on the Giant in the Playground forums, and I would like some input on it from long time fans regarding writing weaknesses and the like.
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=120523
I know I made a few changes for better narrative flow, and I admit played on normal rather than total carnage like a real man (curse my lack of ability and patience), and I deeply regret missing the Gheritt White terminal, but other than that, how is it?

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: Sorry to be making a request with my first post (after about a year of : lurking) but you fellows seemed the best individuals to give advice on all : things Marathon. : I did a Let's Play of Marathon on the Giant in the Playground forums, and I : would like some input on it from long time fans regarding writing : weaknesses and the like. : http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=120523 : I know I made a few changes for better narrative flow, and I admit played on : normal rather than total carnage like a real man (curse my lack of ability : and patience), and I deeply regret missing the Gheritt White terminal, but : other than that, how is it?

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