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Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2

Posted By: Elderman Date: 1/9/08 3:48 a.m.
In Response To: Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 (Elderman)

A couple more small things:
I have one annoying copy editing mistake on 'Unphorseen', in the Hathor Terminal, 5th screen, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentance, you use the wrong pronoun. One way to make it good English would be: 'you are more like *me* than any other I have known.'
And on 'May the Pharce be with You' there's a very strange insubstantial hunter in the corridor at the most southward point in the map, guarding the entrance to the cargo hold. He's visible from far away, but disappears when I get close. I cant hit him either. It's a great hologram effect, but I have a feeling it's not intentional. Of course, the cargo hold takes care of itself. All I had to do was hang out by the rechargers and wait for them to shoot themselves to death.
I especially like both 'Unlucky for Some' for the epic scale and the environment, and 'May the Pharce be with You' for textures that match the architecture.

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Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 12/30/07 4:12 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Blake37 12/30/07 4:36 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 12/30/07 5:02 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Blake37 12/30/07 6:17 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 12/30/07 9:06 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Blake37 12/31/07 5:52 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 12/31/07 7:55 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 patrick 12/31/07 10:16 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 12/31/07 1:20 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 patrick 12/31/07 2:03 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 patrick 12/31/07 2:36 p.m.

err, I mean 'My Kingdom Pfhor A Horse', poly 687 *NM* patrick 12/31/07 3:04 p.m.

WinRAR unzipped it fine for me. *NM* Document 12/31/07 4:01 p.m.

Waiting for confirmation of upload. *NM* Document 12/30/07 6:18 p.m.

Argh! Forrest of B.org 1/1/08 2:09 a.m.

Can you also upload just the map file? *NM* Document 1/1/08 6:54 a.m.

Re: Can you also upload just the map file? Document 1/1/08 6:57 a.m.

Re: Can you also upload just the map file? Forrest of B.org 1/1/08 2:41 p.m.

Re: Argh! Blake37 1/1/08 9:47 a.m.

bungie.org appears to be having server trouble. *NM* Document 1/1/08 10:25 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Marathoner325 1/1/08 4:15 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 SnowCrash 1/4/08 9:32 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 1/4/08 11:13 a.m.

I intend on going through it next week. *NM* patrick 1/4/08 1:24 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Document 1/4/08 2:50 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 1/4/08 8:44 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Document 1/6/08 2:31 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 D-M.A. 1/6/08 3:06 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Document 1/6/08 3:17 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 D-M.A. 1/6/08 3:18 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 treellama 1/6/08 4:27 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 D-M.A. 1/6/08 7:48 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Document 1/16/08 6:41 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 kyjel 1/16/08 7:58 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Document 1/17/08 12:22 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Marathoner325 1/17/08 5:14 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 1/17/08 6:12 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 kyjel 1/17/08 8:13 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Marathoner325 1/18/08 6:09 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Document 2/5/08 4:37 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Elderman 1/5/08 8:06 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 1/5/08 4:00 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 bluewpc 1/5/08 4:53 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 1/6/08 2:47 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 bluewpc 1/6/08 6:42 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 1/6/08 10:50 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Elderman 1/6/08 5:14 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 1/6/08 11:11 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Elderman 1/7/08 6:04 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Elderman 1/9/08 3:48 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 SnowCrash 1/7/08 11:48 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 1/7/08 11:02 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 SnowCrash 1/8/08 12:04 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 SnowCrash 1/8/08 5:30 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 SnowCrash 1/8/08 6:09 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 SnowCrash 1/8/08 8:05 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 1/8/08 8:19 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 1/8/08 10:15 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 SnowCrash 1/8/08 12:46 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 1/8/08 1:19 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 1/8/08 11:07 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 SnowCrash 1/9/08 1:24 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 1/9/08 3:40 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Forrest of B.org 1/10/08 8:05 p.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 SnowCrash 1/11/08 2:08 a.m.

Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2 Tek 1/9/08 5:24 p.m.

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: A couple more small things: I have one annoying copy editing mistake on : 'Unphorseen', in the Hathor Terminal, 5th screen, 3rd paragraph, 1st : sentance, you use the wrong pronoun. One way to make it good English would : be: 'you are more like *me* than any other I have known.' : And on 'May the Pharce be with You' there's a very strange insubstantial : hunter in the corridor at the most southward point in the map, guarding : the entrance to the cargo hold. He's visible from far away, but disappears : when I get close. I cant hit him either. It's a great hologram effect, but : I have a feeling it's not intentional. Of course, the cargo hold takes : care of itself. All I had to do was hang out by the rechargers and wait : for them to shoot themselves to death. : I especially like both 'Unlucky for Some' for the epic scale and the : environment, and 'May the Pharce be with You' for textures that match the : architecture.

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Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	12/30/07 4:12 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Blake37	12/30/07 4:36 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	12/30/07 5:02 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Blake37	12/30/07 6:17 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	12/30/07 9:06 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Blake37	12/31/07 5:52 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	12/31/07 7:55 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	patrick	12/31/07 10:16 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	12/31/07 1:20 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	patrick	12/31/07 2:03 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	patrick	12/31/07 2:36 p.m.
err, I mean 'My Kingdom Pfhor A Horse', poly 687 NM	patrick	12/31/07 3:04 p.m.
WinRAR unzipped it fine for me. NM	Document	12/31/07 4:01 p.m.
Waiting for confirmation of upload. NM	Document	12/30/07 6:18 p.m.
Argh!	Forrest of B.org	1/1/08 2:09 a.m.
Can you also upload just the map file? NM	Document	1/1/08 6:54 a.m.
Re: Can you also upload just the map file?	Document	1/1/08 6:57 a.m.
Re: Can you also upload just the map file?	Forrest of B.org	1/1/08 2:41 p.m.
Re: Argh!	Blake37	1/1/08 9:47 a.m.
bungie.org appears to be having server trouble. NM	Document	1/1/08 10:25 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Marathoner325	1/1/08 4:15 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	SnowCrash	1/4/08 9:32 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	1/4/08 11:13 a.m.
I intend on going through it next week. NM	patrick	1/4/08 1:24 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Document	1/4/08 2:50 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	1/4/08 8:44 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Document	1/6/08 2:31 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	D-M.A.	1/6/08 3:06 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Document	1/6/08 3:17 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	D-M.A.	1/6/08 3:18 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	treellama	1/6/08 4:27 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	D-M.A.	1/6/08 7:48 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Document	1/16/08 6:41 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	kyjel	1/16/08 7:58 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Document	1/17/08 12:22 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Marathoner325	1/17/08 5:14 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	1/17/08 6:12 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	kyjel	1/17/08 8:13 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Marathoner325	1/18/08 6:09 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Document	2/5/08 4:37 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Elderman	1/5/08 8:06 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	1/5/08 4:00 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	bluewpc	1/5/08 4:53 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	1/6/08 2:47 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	bluewpc	1/6/08 6:42 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	1/6/08 10:50 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Elderman	1/6/08 5:14 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	1/6/08 11:11 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Elderman	1/7/08 6:04 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Elderman	1/9/08 3:48 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	SnowCrash	1/7/08 11:48 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	1/7/08 11:02 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	SnowCrash	1/8/08 12:04 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	SnowCrash	1/8/08 5:30 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	SnowCrash	1/8/08 6:09 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	SnowCrash	1/8/08 8:05 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	1/8/08 8:19 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	1/8/08 10:15 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	SnowCrash	1/8/08 12:46 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	1/8/08 1:19 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	1/8/08 11:07 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	SnowCrash	1/9/08 1:24 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	1/9/08 3:40 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Forrest of B.org	1/10/08 8:05 p.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	SnowCrash	1/11/08 2:08 a.m.
Re: Eternal X Final Candidate 2	Tek	1/9/08 5:24 p.m.



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