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Re: epilogue terminal needing editing [final post]
Posted By: Forrest of B.orgDate: 12/25/07 3:08 p.m.

In Response To: Re: epilogue terminal needing editing [final post] (patrick)

: One final edit.

: The Near Side Of Everywhere , poly 867, quote-

: - As the demons' wanton rage and inhibition fuels their own tortment,
: even as reality itself concedes to their every whim

Oh actually that line is entirely correct. See, I'm trying to hint at all lawyers being W'rkncacnter in disguise; and their wanton rage and inhibition fuels their desire to file civil lawsuits, even though they could just run for congress and simply vote to change reality (e.g. changing tomatos from fruits into vegetables) instead of suing about it ;-)

: With the playthrough finished I've no more QC here; further comments would
: lie in the realm of non-trivial review/critique.

Well thank you very much for all your wonderful feedback; and I'd be happy to hear more review/critique if you'd like to write some :-)

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