: If I ever acquire the skills needed (or find an interested party who already
: has them), it will probably be an AlephOne-only scenario; that's what
: everyone should be playing nowdays.
You know, I found your terminal writing abilities very, very good, and in fact I've looked back on them while writing some terminals for Manus Celer Dei to get a better idea of what an ideal terminal should be like. From both your terminals and others I studied rather closely (Rubicon mostly) I've seen that it's often good for terminals to be rather vague concerning certain things. No one wants to sit and read while Durandal or someone else explains in detail the situation and what the player has to do. Of course, being too vague is certainly not good either. You hit a good balance. Plus the story for Redemption seemed very, very good. Do you have an AIM screenname I could contact to possibly discuss MCD's story and get suggestions?