Re: The Pfhor


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Re: The Pfhor

Posted By: Yossarian Date: 3/18/04 6:44 p.m.
In Response To: The Pfhor (Anaphiel)

:snip:
:miss:
:bleeding cut:
Dammit!
:hasty bangading:
:snip again:
:::A lot of people see the Pfhor as being insectile, but they always looked softer to me, so I've gone with a sort of cuttlefish look for lot of the softer areas with a lot of obvious bony/shell-like exo- and endo-skeleton showing. Dunno how well that comes across.:::
:very careful snip:
Quite well, actually, but I don't see many softer areas on this dude. I've always thought of the enforces as being a little more soft and fleshy, but this work very very well. Perhaps maybe too well in that the hard look to him(?) seems to imply a thickness or skin/exoskeleton that makes the observer wonder how much room there is for internal organs or what have you. If I could make one tiny suggestion it would be to bulk him up a bit around the belly and neck, or, instead, a flowing cape beneath the armor?
Considering the captive human, I think it would be cool to hide him a bit, perhaps thicken the cryogenic goo...or scary floating eels (or not) so that the observer has to more or less "discover" the enforcer's catch, thus overall strengthening the impact of the piece as a whole and indirectly adding another dimension to the personality of the enforcer. I think this would sort of add more depth to the piece as all is not laid out and obvious after the first few glances...I know you know that but I'm just pointing stuff out cuz its fun.
Lastly, any thought to what's going to go on the bare floor left center? A Looker perhaps? The reflection of the marine in the window sneaking around the corner? A pool of radioactive green goo? Whatever it is I'm sure it will be good.
Those are just my $0.03 Canadian, I'm no artist or nothin' but that's the beauty of the forum. Again, a smashing job, this is truly very beautiful.
Yosarian.

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The Pfhor Anaphiel 3/18/04 5:48 p.m.

Re: The Pfhor Forrest of B.org 3/18/04 6:02 p.m.

Re: The Pfhor Yossarian 3/18/04 6:44 p.m.

Re: The Pfhor Anaphiel 3/18/04 7:03 p.m.

Re: The Pfhor cc-vortex 3/18/04 8:53 p.m.

Re: The Pfhor Todd 3/18/04 11:41 p.m.

Re: The Pfhor the Battle Cat 3/19/04 6:27 a.m.

Re: The Pfhor Major Major. 3/19/04 4:24 p.m.

Re: The Pfhor Kirk 3/19/04 6:18 a.m.

Sounds like a plan *NM* deathmonger 3/19/04 6:26 a.m.

Re: The Pfhor Jorge Salas 3/19/04 6:31 a.m.

That are designed before hand by Jay :) *NM* Kirk 3/19/04 6:50 a.m.

Re: The Pfhor the Battle Cat 3/19/04 6:40 a.m.

Re: The Pfhor Anaphiel 3/19/04 6:56 a.m.

Bob, Marathon Grasshopper 3/19/04 7:21 a.m.

Re: The Pfhor Kirk 3/19/04 7:37 a.m.

Re: The Pfhor the Battle Cat 3/20/04 7:31 a.m.

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: Dammit! : Quite well, actually, but I don't see many softer areas on this dude. I've : always thought of the enforces as being a little more soft and fleshy, but : this work very very well. Perhaps maybe too well in that the hard look to : him(?) seems to imply a thickness or skin/exoskeleton that makes the : observer wonder how much room there is for internal organs or what have : you. If I could make one tiny suggestion it would be to bulk him up a bit : around the belly and neck, or, instead, a flowing cape beneath the armor? : Considering the captive human, I think it would be cool to hide him a bit, : perhaps thicken the cryogenic goo...or scary floating eels (or not) so : that the observer has to more or less "discover" the enforcer's : catch, thus overall strengthening the impact of the piece as a whole and : indirectly adding another dimension to the personality of the enforcer. I : think this would sort of add more depth to the piece as all is not laid : out and obvious after the first few glances...I know you know that but I'm : just pointing stuff out cuz its fun. : Lastly, any thought to what's going to go on the bare floor left center? A : Looker perhaps? The reflection of the marine in the window sneaking around : the corner? A pool of radioactive green goo? Whatever it is I'm sure it : will be good. : Those are just my $0.03 Canadian, I'm no artist or nothin' but that's the : beauty of the forum. Again, a smashing job, this is truly very beautiful. : Yosarian.

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The Pfhor	Anaphiel	3/18/04 5:48 p.m.
Re: The Pfhor	Forrest of B.org	3/18/04 6:02 p.m.
Re: The Pfhor	Yossarian	3/18/04 6:44 p.m.
Re: The Pfhor	Anaphiel	3/18/04 7:03 p.m.
Re: The Pfhor	cc-vortex	3/18/04 8:53 p.m.
Re: The Pfhor	Todd	3/18/04 11:41 p.m.
Re: The Pfhor	the Battle Cat	3/19/04 6:27 a.m.
Re: The Pfhor	Major Major.	3/19/04 4:24 p.m.
Re: The Pfhor	Kirk	3/19/04 6:18 a.m.
Sounds like a plan NM	deathmonger	3/19/04 6:26 a.m.
Re: The Pfhor	Jorge Salas	3/19/04 6:31 a.m.
That are designed before hand by Jay :) NM	Kirk	3/19/04 6:50 a.m.
Re: The Pfhor	the Battle Cat	3/19/04 6:40 a.m.
Re: The Pfhor	Anaphiel	3/19/04 6:56 a.m.
Bob, Marathon	Grasshopper	3/19/04 7:21 a.m.
Re: The Pfhor	Kirk	3/19/04 7:37 a.m.
Re: The Pfhor	the Battle Cat	3/20/04 7:31 a.m.



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