In Response To: Unnamed Fic *long* (The Se7enth Prophet)
: Yeh, couldn't think of a name for this one. It took me maybe 30 minutes last
: night to write, so don't expect much.
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: As the Chief hurtled towards earth, the Prophet of Truth pnodered the
: location of his sacred key. He couldn't even begin to understand why the
: incompotent dirt of a race was swarming all over it. How they could get to
: it before him. The humans had found what he had searched his whole life
: for, and they would be meant to pay.
: Long had he searched for his sacred key. Long had he awaited to unleash its
: all mighty light and gain acceptance into the divine beyond. Soon, it
: would all be over, he thought. Soon, his mighty Covenant would Gods. He
: would become the grerater being, along with those who stayed loyal to him.
: He gazed out over the stained land that held the key, tainted with human
: scum. He could not get over the fact that they were there, and not him.How
: could the filth stain such a holy place. The orb was all he wanted, and he
: would stop at nothing to get to it.
: The ancient craft shuddered. Tagronos, a brute ship master, approached Truth.
: "Our holy chariot has been hit, great one," The brute bowed,
: "We are prepared to fire when commanded."
: "Take it out," Truth's eyes redirected to the human ship, "Be
: sure to leave none of them behind. Their blood shall be spilled as our
: brothers blood was.
: A brute stationed in front of a glowing panel punched in a command. The ship
: began to hum. The point at the top of it began to glow an illuminating
: blue light. From it, a quick, thin line shot from it, directed at the
: human vessel that had previously fired upon them.
: The human craft sat ther, just drifting in space. Its hull glowed a hellish
: red around the point where the shot had impacted. Suddenly, a shimmer
: appeard over the human ship, and with a muffled Bam! the vessel was
: gone. destroyed in an explosion of red and orange.
: The Forerunner craft continued with its decent to the sacred key like an
: unstoppable force, killing all that got in its way. It was like the gods
: had given Truth the power to wipe the humans out with one swift blow.
: The humans watched in fear and awe of the destruction caused by the craft.
: There was nothing they could do to stop it. It crept along, slowly killing
: them all.
: Truth watched the destruction in his own self glory. He saw the power the
: great ones had bestowed upon him and his mighty Covenant. He would not
: show mercy to any of the humans.
: "You threw a party and forgot to invite me?" a voice came from
: behind Truth, "Now that isn't nice."
: Truth swung around on his floating pedestal and looked in horor at what he
: saw, "DEMON!" His voice boomed throughout the control room,
: "Get him! Kill him now!
: "Well," Cortana began, "That's not nice to do when you have
: visitors.."
: Four brutes, three with the enhance brute plama rifle and one with a brute
: shot, rounded the corner and immedeatly opened fire. Three plasma bolts
: splashed across the Master Chief's hields, draining them to one-fourth
: their capacity. A grenade bounced right by him and exploded shortly after
: leaving the ground. His shields died.
: The Chief dove for cover, but the Brutes continued to fire. Molten scraps of
: metel, both melted off of the walls of the ship and from the plasma rifles
: themselves, hissed passed him. The air around the Chief sizzled and
: cracked.
: "Send him into eternal damnation," Truth commanded the brutes.
: "This demon does not deserve to live."
: The Master Chief's shields cracked and sparked, but would not regenerate.
: "Your shields," Cortana told him "are shot. One of those
: brutes hit your generator."
: Without his shields, the Chief wouldn't be able to win this fight. He had to
: try. He tossed a grenade back towards the brutes. A loud thump! was
: heardan the Chief fley out, firing his SMGs at the brutes.
: A depp laugh came from behind him. It was the last thing he heard. A brute
: had made his way beind the Chief and hit him in the back of the head,
: knocking him unconcious.
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: Well, I know it's not the best, but rate it, critique it, whatever.
I don't like it, merely because the Chief loses :)
And where did Cortana come from?
Still, pretty good. Pretty obvious it's a fanfic by the way the text melds, but still pretty good.
Thumbs up!
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Sorry, not a very good thumb. But good enough ^_^
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