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Posted By: vector40 <vector40@aol.com> In Response To: Truth and Beauty (Chelsea Bridge)
Date: 18 June 2001, 13:37
> Calling birds and pirouetting hands
> The things of which some dream
> Two become two more
> On the clocks atop the citadel beyond the shore
> They found their locus in a note
> Buried and shifted under the sand
> Tattered and torn and worn of glory
> High in the spire, lay end of the story
> The time has come, but not gone
> As it must surely count for something
> Waiting inside the marble and stone
> Behind the rusted anticyclone
> Truly,
> Chelsea
In an attempt to shake loose an idea that's been rattling in my head for awhile, I'm doing Chelsea the favor of editing her work. It helps the rhyming scheme and doesn't affect the meaning.
Calling birds and pirouetting hands
Two become two more
The things of which some dream
On the clocks atop the citadel beyond the shore
They found their locus in a note
Tattered and torn and worn of glory
Buried and shifted under the sand
High in the spire, lay end of the story
The time has come, but not gone
Waiting inside the marble and stone
As it must surely count for something
Behind the rusted anticyclone
It was a pretty good piece, by the way.
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